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Robin McAulay
{K:8908} 7/15/2003
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this is greaaat! - the red chimney does stay prominant - sky very intense adding to the overall drama - the shadows and lines work brilliantly
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Jim McNitt
{K:11246} 7/10/2003
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Hello Masahiko:
To me the most import subject in this scene is the small red chimney, which is why I placed it at the intersection of thirds -- which in classical composition theory consists of four "dymanic" points at which objects acquire increased visual gravity. There a plenty of exceptions to classical composition, but in this case, I think the positioning of the red chimney does make it the dominant element.
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Gregory Fiedler
{K:15439} 7/10/2003
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Nicly composed. Great color and sharpness.
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peta jones
{K:12615} 7/10/2003
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Jim the original with the blue sky is very good, but the whole of the added sky being in the same colour tones makes this such a striking image to me.
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Masahiko Shibata
{K:14107} 7/10/2003
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Beautiful!! But where is your chief point?The sky? The chimney,the wall or shadow?About the shadow ,it is too much.
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Richard Blount
{K:8015} 7/9/2003
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I like the juxtaposition of the chimneys they line up very nicely the lighting is probably a little harder than it would be in the morning but seems to work well, the sky layer is fantastic, I am going to try that out myself, I couldn't get a better teacher, great shot Jim - Richard.
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Daniela Caneschi
{K:906} 7/9/2003
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Great for light and texture
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E. Rutemueller
{K:5} 7/9/2003
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A beautiful composition. Wonderful colors and contrast.
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Kosmas Lazaridis
{K:943} 7/9/2003
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good colors
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Hakan Aker
{K:14146} 7/9/2003
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Hi Jim,i loved what you did to the chimneys,and although thefinal result is very striking,im not so sure about the sky and the sunrise.Its still a very strong shot
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Jim McNitt
{K:11246} 7/9/2003
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FYI:
Here's the original Canon D-60 RAW file saved without cropping or adjustments.
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