TRue James, looks much better. Looking back at this picture, I found it very strange that I centered the sun so much, since I tried to take care of the rule of thirds that holiday. Apparently I missed something here, or was looking at another subject then the sun, which I don't remember, so next action point: writing all down :-)
You have a good compocition, but the foto is to dark. It should be more sharp, more contrast lees coloring mabye, you can fix it a bit in PS. Regards Kaj Nielsen