I think you do some nice photography. I like the close up portraits you do the most. These picture have a some kind of lack of tention. As a viewer you feel to far away from the model. I don't know what you would have to do to get the exitement back, but a little closer up to the model or maybe a more divered lighting would do good. Maybe my sound is a little critical, but don't mean to blow of your pictures or something like that. Like I said before I like what you do, but these kind of pictures need some adjustments to my personal taste.
Thanks for the recent comment, I don't know about that picture. The lighting conditions as you said where good, but somehow I still manage to overlight the right pilars. I don't like that. But I have to say towards my own pictures I'am very sceptic. :) Greets, Tim.