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Roberto Arcari Farinetti
{K:209486} 8/20/2006
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IMPRESSIVE.. fine light in the panorama and details visible..
i like it
roby
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nasima salehi
{K:872} 7/12/2006
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thank u.i try to do my best.
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Kiarang Alaei
{K:49415} 7/10/2006
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Nasima;
the vivid and sharp color, you know is a technical basis that photographers in different levels try to reach it,
although this needs some good technical photography objects too, buy anyway we all shall do it with our limited amature photography lens and DSLRs.
about the light i mean the main light that's behind your subject, it cause some poor contrast all arround the photo.
thanks for your reply. hope to find more by you!
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nasima salehi
{K:872} 7/10/2006
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thanx very much for the time u spent to critique my shots and write to me.i really appreciat and try to improve my work.
but about the light and contarast,in my opinion the city which is lying in a gray bed cant be vivid and sharp specially from the long shot.the houses just seem to be crumpled papers!
this is'nt a nice work completely because of the reason u mentioned but any way i think unfortunately our city has this face too.
thankx again
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Kiarang Alaei
{K:49415} 7/10/2006
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Well,it's hard to talk about this work,because there are few elements to provide a contact betwen the viewer and the idea of photographer in this shot.
but seems that the "composition" is the main thing that can start;
unusual composition by the long vertical crain maybe showes the future of living in abusy city.
but the light isn't perfect at all and this is why we can't find any vivid colour tones and good contrast in this work.
keep clicking nasima.
your previous work was realy exellent, i still remember it!
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