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Richard Marks
{K:3809} 7/18/2006
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I'm getting thirsty now, nice shot.... cheers !
Thanks for your comment.
Regards, Richard
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Carlen Boersema
{K:6789} 7/7/2006
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I make my art AFTER alcohol! :)
haha 
Anyway thanks for the critique/comments. I was hoping someone would mention the shadow.
I will look at the brightness again and see what I can come up with. I already brightened it a lot from the original image but I can see it could use more.
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:101119} 7/7/2006
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Hey Carlen!
Don't know what Edward meant about making art out of alcohol . . . I make my art AFTER alcohol! :)
This is a very good and refreshing image . . . I think I would tweak the brightness and midtones just a hair to make it lighter overall without losing definition. Your image is fine but (IMO) the brighter image would convey the refreshing theme even more.
___A couple of things to try for future shots
. . . since most alcohol doesn't freeze . . . you could freeze the bottle a bit and then wipe only the label making the bottle frosty.
. . . you could use a household mister and spray one side of the bottle only . . . making perspiration on the bottle accentuates the quenching nature of it.
. . . get a low level backlight to eliminate shadows which distract from the image like the shadow above the glass in this image.
Good capture my friend and I think you may have a natural gift for the still life shots . . .
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Edward Ghoti
{K:5514} 7/6/2006
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Great shot Carlen.
Leave it to a Canadian to make art out of alcohol.
All the best,
Ed
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Carlen Boersema
{K:6789} 7/5/2006
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Thank you very much. This was my first time trying still life and I like it a lot. I will definitely try more sometime.
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Larry Fosse
{K:66493} 7/5/2006
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Well this cools me off on a hot day...excellent still life Carlen...you have lots of nice work in your portfolio...keep up the good stuff
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Carlen Boersema
{K:6789} 7/5/2006
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no it's an alcoholic cooler lol
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Yasuyuki Tanaka
{K:-2122} 7/5/2006
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it looks like very fresh! is it orange juice?
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vanessa shakesheff
{K:68840} 7/4/2006
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Lovely clarity and colour .i could drink that right now ..nessa
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