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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
2/7/2002 2:46:03 AM
Beautiful color
I you don't mind, I'd suggest you to make the background blur or at least looks uniform
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| Photo By: Bert J.L. Kuijer
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
2/6/2002 12:17:14 AM
Good composition
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Photo By: Mary Sue Hayward
(K:17558)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
2/5/2002 8:39:20 AM
Good catch of reflection...
Well done!
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| Photo By: Phillip Filtz
(K:1792)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
2/4/2002 1:16:38 AM
Beautiful image
You can add yellow, red, and green colors to this scene to make it a test photo for advertisement 
Man... this Nikon technology combined with Kodak films work great!
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| Photo By: Phillip Cohen
(K:10561)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
2/3/2002 9:01:46 PM
Phillip,
good portrait!
and good Fuji ad. as well
but the grey stone... I think we agree to make this pic better to throw it from the pic, don't we?
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| Photo By: Phillip Cohen
(K:10561)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
2/3/2002 9:01:23 AM
Impressive moment... good catch
about the background... it's a little bit "busy", isn't it?
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| Photo By: Jason Bennett
(K:213)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
2/3/2002 8:27:18 AM
Beautiful scene... well done!
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| Photo By: dennis fowler
(K:58)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/30/2002 11:01:49 PM
The pic is too small...
Happy hunting
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| Photo By: Cary Shaffer
(K:393)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/30/2002 10:34:09 AM
Well done, but I'd like to see the zipper longer
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| Photo By: David Chang-Sang
(K:680)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/29/2002 8:07:10 AM
Interesting choice of composition and angle of view... Unusual
But the infra-red film didn't show significant effect
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| Photo By: Chris Blaszczyk
(K:610)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/27/2002 11:46:50 PM
The title should be "Indonesian Ninja"... just kidding Phillip
This is another great pics that you took in Indonesia.
What's Cibachrome print, anyway?
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| Photo By: Phillip Cohen
(K:10561)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/27/2002 11:11:34 PM
Man... this is great infrared pic... especially because you used digital camera...
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| Photo By: Beverly Gustafson
(K:1572)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/26/2002 10:18:49 AM
The use of single flash attached on the camera's hotshoe made the image become flat.
You can use an off-camera flash, or use a diffuser, or compensate the flash around -1 to -2 stops. Or use high-speed film and high-speed lens instead of using flash. Then, you may only rely on the stage's lighting.
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| Photo By: Jason Bennett
(K:213)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/25/2002 8:23:22 PM
Really touching... This is kind of Life Magazine's style
If you are a photojournalist, I bet you'll win the annual World Press Photo
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| Photo By: Phil Breedlove
(K:0)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/24/2002 9:35:49 PM
Phillip,
ini foto Ibu yang sangat bagus.
Orang Jawa bilang, "One picture speaks thousand words" (Java or English, just kidding)
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| Photo By: Phillip Cohen
(K:10561)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/23/2002 8:24:14 AM
Eagle's eyes sneaking... good framing and angle. Have you tried to transfer this pic to BW?
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| Photo By: Drew Anderson
(K:209)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/23/2002 8:14:48 AM
Good choice of angle of view. But, I think this pic is too bright and too much yellow. Or maybe it's only scanning problem though...
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| Photo By: Ted Williams (UK)
(K:0)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/21/2002 11:23:50 PM
Phillip,
as foreigner your grammar is quite good. I used to work in Vietnam and Egypt but I found it takes time and patience to learn local language.
Anyway, I will post more pics...
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| Photo By: Kristupa Saragih
(K:1031)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/21/2002 7:50:56 PM
Hi Phillip, apa kabar?
I live in Surakarta, Central Java for the last 5 months. Before that, I lived in Yogyakarta then worked in multinational company which made me travel around the globe.
This pic was taken in Borobudur Temple, Central Java. You must have been there...
In Indonesia, recently people suffers because of the prices of everything go high
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| Photo By: Kristupa Saragih
(K:1031)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/21/2002 8:38:25 AM
Good composition, but the image is a little bit "busy"... anyway, I should go to Sunda Kelapa and take some pics
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| Photo By: Phillip Cohen
(K:10561)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/18/2002 8:47:27 AM
Incredible color... I wish the water stays steady so the reflection of the building can be captured
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| Photo By: Steve Kaufman
(K:2748)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/18/2002 8:37:35 AM
The back light and fill-in light worked out
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| Photo By: Thomas Paul
(K:111)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/17/2002 12:19:58 AM
Jola, if you don't mind these are my comments and suggestions.. this pic has too high contrast. It makes you lost details of the face... look at the model, seems like she doesn't have a nose. And, I think this pic has too much magenta tone... you should add more cyan and yellow... and reduce magenta by adding green tone a little bit.
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| Photo By: Jola Lipka
(K:2)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/15/2002 11:10:47 PM
Mike, this great. Great color, great object... perfect angle of view. Considering you took this with 645 format... did you try to take this scene in vertical format... just curious...
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| Photo By: Michael Busselle
(K:221)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/15/2002 7:40:50 AM
Petros... thanks. And, Altaf... thanks for you suggestion. I put his to portrait, because this's actually model photosession but I took some pics with my personal style. It's not the fashion photosession ordered by fashion designer. I really appreciate the suggestions and comments from both of you guys.
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| Photo By: Kristupa Saragih
(K:1031)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/14/2002 12:01:19 AM
Interesting use of fish-eye lens
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| Photo By: Igor Danyushin
(K:0)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/13/2002 4:57:18 PM
Interesting place. But, I'd prefer to remove the police line first before take shot
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| Photo By: Ted Williams
(K:324)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/9/2002 9:03:28 AM
The model is beautiful and the pose is nice. I'd rather put off the frame on the left side.
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| Photo By: Chris Lawrence
(K:124)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/6/2002 6:53:30 PM
Beautiful color... I hope you don't mind if I suggest to make the background darker so you might get better contrast and isolation to the main subject
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| Photo By: william l. borch(jr.)
(K:315)
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Critique By:
Kristupa Saragih (K:1031)
1/6/2002 6:23:09 PM
This is good, the colors are great. What about taking this pic on horizontal frame?
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| Photo By: dennis chapin
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