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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
4/20/2007 2:59:32 AM
Lucas;
First let me start by saying I find your work very interesting. Although I would not classify your work as "Up Skirt", you have created quite a stir in the forum; I only mention this because of the conversation you and James were having. Check out: http://www.usefilm.com/Photo_Forum/22/1013340/
I find your work very colorful and eye catching, keep up the good work.
JohnT
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| Photo By: Lucas L
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
3/31/2007 5:29:46 AM
Wow, the colors, shapes and composition is what caught my eye...very nice shot. The only suggestion I have is, I might have cropped a little more off the bottom, take out the white edge on the lower right side. I think that might help frame the picture a little better.
very nice work
- JohnT
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| Photo By: Glacus Arantes
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
7/4/2006 8:21:35 AM
Wow, what a very interesting shot. I gave it a quick glance and was immediately drawn to the picture...wanted to take a closer look. I think what really makes this shot is the placement of the glass in the frame; good use of thirds, and also excellent DoF.
Nice work.
JohnT
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| Photo By: Cem Güner
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
6/11/2006 7:02:14 AM
Paul, are you sure it's Lackland AFB, sure does look like the tower on Randolph AFB. Anyway, nice shot, the polarizer worker well and created a beautiful sky. You named this shot "The Taj," so I assume that you wanted to capture the tower. Well, because of the the angle/position of the shot, the monument at the front seems to "steal" the shot...IMHO.
Overall, nice shot...good work.
JohnT
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Photo By: Paul Lara
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
1/2/2006 9:12:40 AM
Very nice colors and composition is what caught my attention. A very nice winter landscape.
Nice work.
- JohnT
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| Photo By: Ian Cameron
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
11/20/2005 4:31:50 PM
Very nice color and composition...good use of thirds. I think the natural light adds really enhances the mood.
Nice work
- JohnT
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| Photo By: Gilo De Gili
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
9/29/2005 3:27:00 PM
Susan;
Great colors, tone and the soft background really makes the model standout...a very attractive model too.!
Nice work
- JohnT
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| Photo By: susan darcey
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
9/16/2005 3:35:14 PM
Very good composition, good use of thirds. I really like the soft colors, and relaxed pose.
Nice shot...good work.
- JohnT
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
9/10/2005 7:13:19 PM
Very nice street shot. I like the way the 32mm adds depth to the shot.
Nice work
- JohnT
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| Photo By: Pawel Wieczorek
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
9/8/2005 3:21:24 PM
This is an interesting shot, immediately caught my attention...good eye. I'm not sure what was on the billboard/sign on the left, but the fuzzy pixelation is a little distracting. Maybe you could crop it out.
Nice capture, good shot
- JohnT
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| Photo By: Luca Miarelli Mariani
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
9/5/2005 9:22:20 PM
Susan;
Great portrait. The soft colors are wonderful and is what caught my attention. Beautiful model and "cute/playful" pose. The only comment/suggestion I have is her hair...to me it just looks a little messy. Maybe it was what you where trying for...
Very nice shot
- JohnT
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| Photo By: susan darcey
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
7/16/2005 2:19:37 AM
Nice colors and tones and good use of thirds. Attractive model and interesting pose...makes you wonder what's she's looking at.
Nice Work
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
7/8/2005 3:42:33 AM
Tracey;
Thank you for the comments. I was in awe while viewing your portfolio...beautiful pictures,excellent work.
- John
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| Photo By: John Truchon
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
6/25/2005 4:56:39 PM
Excellent tones, color, and composition. Very sexy model and great pose immediately caught my attention. The look on the model's face is "mesmerizing", just fantastic.
The 105mm lens was a good choice...great portrait lens.
Excellent shot...great work
- John
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| Photo By: Johan Sorensen
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
6/22/2005 3:18:55 PM
Wow, talk about "the use of thirds"...excellent composition! Very good color and lighting too.
Great shot...nice work
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
6/6/2005 3:43:23 PM
Afriadi;
I really like the use of the empty dark space, attracive model, and cute/catching pose. She looks like she's wearing some nice contracting colors. I think if the light was a little stronger on her, it might bring out the colors.
Nice Shot
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
5/23/2005 3:14:29 PM
Wow...fantastic. Great colors, composition, and lighting & tone.
Good work
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
5/6/2005 3:32:59 PM
Very nice portrait. The vivid color is what immediately caught my attention. Beautiful model and good use of DOF really make this shot...nice work.
This shot made be check out the rest of your portfolio...very nice work.
- John
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| Photo By: sydney lucas
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
3/30/2005 3:23:28 PM
Agree with Kiarang, a little over exposed, her top looks "washed out." Very good use of DOF, really bring her into focus. Attractive model and nice pose.
Nice B&W, good work...
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
3/6/2005 7:00:13 AM
Excellent prospective and colors...nice framing.
Nice shot
- John
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| Photo By: Steve Williams
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
2/8/2005 3:37:44 PM
A very nice B&W shot...I don't think it would have the same "feeling" in color. Good composition too.
Nice work
- John
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| Photo By: Rachel Tomes
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
1/23/2005 5:05:02 PM
I think I like this shot better than the first one (|o)...she has a "playful" expression which brings out her face.
Both shots are well done.
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
1/23/2005 5:01:45 PM
Great B&W street shot. The perspective/angle is what caught my attention...well done. Pretty model with a natural/relaxed pose also helps this shot.
nice work
- John
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| Photo By: Pawel Chrzanowski
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
1/6/2005 4:03:48 PM
Afriadi;
Fantastic shot! The bright, contrasting colors immediately caught my attention. A beautiful model, great pose, excellent use of reflection, and very good composition make a great shot. The look in her eyes is simply stunning...fantastic
GREAT shot
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/31/2004 8:33:17 PM
Ngythanh;
Great composition and colors. The color tone really set the mood of the shot...I think you captured some of your youthful past.
- John
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| Photo By: ngythanh
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/28/2004 3:40:44 PM
Igor & Alastair;
Thank you for your comments...it's constructive comments like this that help me take better shots.
- John
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| Photo By: John Truchon
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/28/2004 3:30:45 PM
Len;
Thanks for the comments, and agree...a great subject too shoot.
This shot was taken this September.
- John
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| Photo By: John Truchon
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/6/2004 12:41:57 PM
Very good use of DOF, makes the subject really stand out. Also, good composition and colors.
Nice shot
- John
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| Photo By: Denzil Jayasinghe
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/3/2004 12:58:57 PM
Great pose and composition...very effective.
Very nice shot
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/2/2004 12:40:49 PM
Robbie;
Not an easy shot with the sun in the background, but you really made it work...very nice shot. Nice pose and GREAT composition.
nice work
- John
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| Photo By: J Dillon
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