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Critique By:
Paul Baarn (K:78)
8/6/2004 2:37:08 PM
Super image. It could do with a little more highlight on the wire, but it is very strong as it is now.
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| Photo By: Gábor Koscsó
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Critique By:
Paul Baarn (K:78)
8/6/2004 2:29:57 PM
Looooooovely!!!!
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| Photo By: Marton Hegedus
(K:125)
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Critique By:
Paul Baarn (K:78)
5/24/2004 9:03:36 PM
Hmm, I'm struggling a bit to find the message in this photo. If it's about the ruins, you could have tried a vertical composition, so they would get more attention. You could have also tried to get it from a lower viewpoint in the boat, so that we would get the feeling of being in the boat. Just my 2 cents.
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| Photo By: Dennis Wiener
(K:236)
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Critique By:
Paul Baarn (K:78)
5/24/2004 8:55:06 PM
This is an excellent portrait. Great lighting. Shame I don't get to know more about it. I think the composition works because he's leaning back just a little, at least that's what it looks like in the frame. This shot attracted me right from the thumbnail and to me that's what a good photograph can do.
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| Photo By: EDWIN ERVANTO SOELISTYO
(K:101)
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Critique By:
Paul Baarn (K:78)
2/13/2003 9:59:12 PM
Harvey,
Thanks for your comments. Putting in the face was a novelty for me, as I'm just starting with photography and photoshop, but I understand it's been done before. I'm going to take your advise on the framing and work on the original still life and see if I can improve on the framing. I hadn't even thought about the framing until now. Thanx! (I've attached the original. I'll redo the shot when I'm more experienced with lighting and composition)
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| Photo By: Paul Baarn
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Critique By:
Paul Baarn (K:78)
2/7/2003 5:34:26 PM
Thanks for the comments, Lisa. This was actually more of a snapshot than a portrait. I've only just started taking photography seriously, and I'm currently using Photoshop as my digital studio. Indeed I had to tone down the lighting because the flash made everything look very harsh, but I'm very pleased with the result.
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| Photo By: Paul Baarn
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