try taking the shot a little closer to dusk. otherwise, more lighting, or longer exposure time. good first attempt, but work on it. you can do better. btw, if you stitched this together from several shots, what software did you use?
It looks good from a panorama standpoint, I take it it's stiched together from several shots. I like night shots but I think some more ambient lighting in the foreground like landscaping lights, etc. could have done more to help light the scene as it's too dark. Keep up the work, the photo has an interesting look and feel despite the low lighting.