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Cindi Czaja
{K:5314} 6/8/2004
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Stefan both Traj I and II are strong. But I am personally attracted more to this as to the composition - her more flush left and water to right - it's a stronger image to me in this crop. Lighting both good on her. And if we are going to get into the "nitpicks" -- I'd burn out the white line above water droplets left and the right droplet to the left of her elbow -- in my opinion this would keep your eye on that loop of water from her face out to the left. I will say that the two drops on her arm do not in my opinion take away from shot - it's just in that deep dark background -- Very well done my friend. Kind Regards, Cindi
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ana ribeiro
{K:21290} 6/2/2004
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many merits! very wel done , a gracious compositon
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c c
{K:13449} 6/1/2004
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Both of these shots are amazing....I love that you have frozen the water....very cool effect. Nicely done!
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Burak Tanriover
{K:16610} 6/1/2004
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the water composition looks very interesting and beautiful,This one's composition is better in my eyes,best regards
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Stefan Engström
{K:24473} 6/1/2004
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Dirck - you are expressing how I feel about these. I was very fortunate to have this late light come through only in patches and that she happened to be standing in one of those spots.
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Dirck DuFlon
{K:35779} 6/1/2004
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I love the water in this one, Stefan, and how the dark background isolates your subject! Overall I think I prefer this shot, although I like her expression better in the second one.
Those curls are amazing - what a cutie!
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Stefan Engström
{K:24473} 6/1/2004
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Thanks Dina - didn't even see it as it so often is with my own images. At least it will be easy to clone out :-)
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Stefan Engström
{K:24473} 6/1/2004
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Thank you Tom - you make perfect sense. I gave this more lateral room since the "trajectory" needs it. The drops to the side in the other one were less interesting which is why I cropped a little closer to her face there.
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tom rumland
{K:14874} 6/1/2004
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stefan, this particular photo made me smile. very cool in so many levels. primarily (for me) is the water pattern. it looks like a digital effect and almost unreal. the fact that the little girl is the source of this pattern makes this a very original shot. kind of interesting that you managed to create art that doubles as a family photo (i assume this is your daughter).
also, i like this one better than II. the girl off to the right gives the water more room to be. the second one feels a bit constrained. not sure if i'm making sense...
take care,
tom
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Dina Marie
{K:-1410} 6/1/2004
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Both of these photos are brilliant. On this one, I do notice a white line in the upper center that is distracting..... I love the way the water droplets surround her face... into my favorites for sure...
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Roberto Arcari Farinetti
{K:209486} 6/1/2004
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so a great idea and perfect the bG in black.. a nice one..great play with water!
roby
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