Just to give general opinion since you haven't asked for specifics...
I think the shot is let down by the large area that is out of focus (DOF). Because of the closeup nature of the shot, depth of field is reduced massively. I think you'd gain a singificant improvement by cropping far more tigh Please Add a Constructive Comment:
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tly around the in-focus berries. I'd keep some of the out of focus stem leading to the berries, as this gives the image depth.
I'd say whatever the brown line in the background is, you'd have been better composing such that it wasn't in the shot - the red berries against a varied green (DOF'ed out of focus) background might work better. Finally, I think you'd have been better using a tripod (assuming you didn't), and a smaller aperture to get more depth of field so that at least the berries are all sharp. As they're all tightly packed, letting them go out of focus seems to me to mush them together.
I hope that helps and isn't discouraging, just my opinions! Chris PS No rating from me as I prefer just to comment.
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