Hi again Phillip, Out of the two photos submitted of Tina, I like the one of her in the red best. They are both really well lit, and have great, natural poses, but if I can nit pick -- the hair part on this one gets to me. The colour of her hair along the part is also a lot lighter, drawing my eyes there... making it seem even more awkward.
Again, you've done a really nice job on both of these, and I hope that she loved the outcome.