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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 3/31/2009
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Nicely put into good coordinates that caught the depth well, Indranil! It makes distance quite strongly perceptible with the many leading lines that work hand in hand.
The composition is a bit centered to me. I think that the sitting guy at the one corner and the tables at the other one would have made the composition better, together with some small rotation. (Attachment, for an impression.) Also, some more exposure could make the guy and the whole depth better visible, but I guess then that the white part of the floor would be overexposed. Quite a hard situation for lighting.
Cheers!
Nick
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Moved image parts by cutting and pasting, added lines as indicators of what the composition could have been |
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Ania Zielińska-Hoşaf
{K:61374} 3/21/2009
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Excellent perspective and composition... maybe just too dark in the upper part?
Best wishes,
Ania
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Indranil Ray
{K:5050} 3/21/2009
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Anek dhnnobad Krishnendu. Khub valo laglo tomar suggestions and comments bondhu :)
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Indranil Ray
{K:5050} 3/21/2009
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Thank you very much Aylin :)
Regards!
Indranil
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Indranil Ray
{K:5050} 3/21/2009
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Thanks a ton Srna. I really appriciate your constractive comments and suggestions. Glad to know that you like it.
Best Wishes!
Neel
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K r i s h n e n d u - The NoOne
{K:12059} 3/20/2009
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amio anindya-dar sathe ekmot. loktake arektu frame-e rakhle aro bhalo hoto.
kintu eta ta bole kharap hoyni :)
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Aylin ATASAGUN
{K:13273} 3/20/2009
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Very nice image!
Congrats
Aylin
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Srna Stankovic
{K:172232} 3/20/2009
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Excellent Indranil ... just a bit too dark for my taste, would like to see a man clearly ... but this is just my personal taste ... overall excellent composition.
Best,
Srna
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Indranil Ray
{K:5050} 3/20/2009
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Anek dhnnobad Anindya. Khub valo laglo tomar constractive comments dekhe. Ha thik-e bolecho, bose thaka lok ta aro ektu frame er modhye thakte parto.
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Anindya Chakraborty
{K:12765} 3/20/2009
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Eta kintu besh bhalo lagto, bose thaka lok take ar aktu framer modhdhe nite parte. Anyway, amar bhalo laglo etao, specifically ami nije foreground rakha pochondo kori..ar etateo seta present. Good one.
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Indranil Ray
{K:5050} 3/20/2009
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Ore songe boshle chobi ta k tulto? Onno kau tulle ai chobi ta tumi ekheney dekhte parte na.
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Aungsita Chatterjee
{K:19843} 3/20/2009
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bah besh valo tobe eka keno tumito parte or sathe aktu boste.......
bubai.
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