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Martin Fisher
{K:5393} 4/16/2003
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Great pose and location. Terrific eye contact. What a marvelous portrait. The only fault is the shadow on her chin. The shadows on her jacket, while a little distracting, are OK. The chin should have been lifted just high enough to take the shadow off the chin.
You ask if this is good enough. What does the model think? She is the customer. Personaly, I think it looks pro. Is this the only one that turned out? If so, practice more before advertising. If there are others as good as this, start advertising!
Shyfox
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Andy Eulass
{K:13435} 4/16/2003
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Although I think the shadows are a bit strong, I like the overall image a lot. Its casual and relaxed. I guess it also helps that Cristin is stunning. :) Its very warm and very pleasant. Good work.
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Don Loseke
{K:32503} 4/16/2003
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This will work very well for a casual shot. I think the model would be very satisfied with this picture. You might try with a little less saturation. Well done. Don.
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Francesco Raciti
{K:7101} 4/16/2003
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portrait very good
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Quinn Jacobson
{K:199} 4/16/2003
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Hi Will,
The light is nice (warm), but I would have to agree about the shadows. They are disturbing (for this kind of portrait) to me.
Kudos on the composition, DOF and an expressive face.
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Javed Rassi
{K:8223} 4/16/2003
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Good portrait.
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Nando Mondino
{K:14261} 4/16/2003
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Nice portrait!
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Maurizio Massetti
{K:30463} 4/16/2003
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I don't think this is a good lightning: the shadow of a flower is disturbing her face. Good focus and details, nice expression of the girl. Regards. MM.
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Dez Karpati
{K:2237} 4/16/2003
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Beautiful, great composition
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