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Leslie Cohelan
{K:20807} 4/19/2003
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i like this...you've got great lighting and excellent color...her pose, the crossed feet and the slight tilt alonfg with the big smile,give the image a playful sensuality about it...only one nit...I think it is cropped just a bit too close to her arm on the lower left...needs just a bit more space...beauitiful model
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Giuseppe Di Pierro
{K:5911} 4/19/2003
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nice contrast, but i dont like the down cut, but the composition is good
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michelle k.
{K:16270} 4/17/2003
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i'm usually not one for studio shots but this is good, cute expression : ) beautiful girl....
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Stéphane MAUCCI
{K:31} 4/17/2003
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I like the color of the body. I'm not sure about the feet.
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Karen Johnson
{K:2951} 4/5/2003
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She has a great smile Martin, I think with your lighting, it seems to be just a little too bright, I know when I first started with studio lights everything I did was overlit because I was scared everything would be too dark. The light on the background looks ok, but on her face she has alot of hot spots, maybe you could try turning the lights down and moving them around as well as lighting as you are. I like her pose even with the feet where they are but another little nipik is the cropping, a little close on the elbow and fingers, also theres no light in her eyes, sorry if this sounds so negative I don't mean to be.
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Don Loseke
{K:32503} 4/5/2003
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Great expression among other things. Great lighting and exposure. Well done. Don.
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Elangovan S
{K:10675} 4/5/2003
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Nice model, lighting. Very welldone. But Im not sure of the leg position, looks like coming out her head. Hmmm... anyway thats my opinion.
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Mr. Arrey
{K:11516} 4/5/2003
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nice composition and light, but there are alot of reflection. Try using indirect and diffused light.
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Fred Buckley
{K:437} 4/5/2003
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Martin, I see what you mean about these photos. I think all these shots have nice elements to them. Like all other photos that have ever been shot, they also have things that could be improved upon. What I like best about this series, is that you took a lot of shots with a lot of different lighting ideas; instead of the standard "Color by numbers" photography style. Alfred Stieglitz didn't go through all that trouble to fuse art and photography, just so that we can plug in the strobes and photograph with blinders on. keep seeing and experimenting. -Fred
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Lauren Brush
{K:124} 4/5/2003
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This one is nice. Much more natural expression and not such soft focus as Naomi 4. Without the feet peeping through it would just be another typical portrait pose.
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