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Mark Beltran
{K:32612} 6/4/2004
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This is very good. It's one of those photographs that you would make when you ask the question "how would it look photographed."
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Alfredo Castanheira
{K:417} 9/11/2003
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Beautiful pic and portfolio!! Congrats!
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John Strazza
{K:11535} 4/3/2003
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wonderful ...
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David Goldfarb
{K:7611} 1/13/2003
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That's getting there. There is much stronger detail in the top of the frame that way.
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Alisa Mudge
{K:12511} 2/13/2004
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David,
Thanks for taking so much time to help me with this
image. Here is the edited version in b&w.
AM
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David Goldfarb
{K:7611} 1/12/2003
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Very sensual. I like the image. Nice textures here.
The subtleties of tonality are lost on a computer monitor, but imagining a print, I'd like to see maximum density in the lines outlining the figure in the lower right and just a shade more detail along the top edge, particularly in the upper left corner. Maybe I'd burn in the area indicated in the attached image by 1/2 to 1 stop. The brightness along this surface that catches the sun more directly seems to lead the eye out of the frame.
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