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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
9/10/2007 3:31:56 AM
Andre,
For a photographer with such strong images I wish you could have given some constructive criticism instead of something that could be percieved as a thinly veiled insult.
If you don't like the image, please tell me how I can improve it.
Within the definition of Critiquers Corner it states, "Critiques should be long enough to convey your thoughts about the image, improvements that could be made in technique, exposure, composition, lighting etc.."
Terry
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
9/6/2007 7:41:49 AM
Nice composition with shilouette.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Stan Ciszek
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
9/4/2007 7:10:39 AM
Timing is everything!
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Ornella Erminio
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
9/3/2007 7:57:38 AM
Nessa,
Beautiful depth and color!
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Nessa Gnatoush
(K:341)
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
9/1/2007 10:54:26 AM
Again with such a sophisticated image!
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Shirley D. Cross-Taylor
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
9/1/2007 10:52:49 AM
Yutaka,
I enjoy the simplicity and color harmonies.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Yutaka Itinose
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
9/1/2007 10:51:35 AM
This image is engaging. I don't know if it is the composition, tonal range, subject or background.
High ISO?
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Robert Staeck
(K:919)
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
8/1/2007 8:02:12 AM
Thank you Carolina.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Terry Taylor
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
8/1/2007 8:01:33 AM
Thank you Alicia.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Terry Taylor
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
8/1/2007 1:49:31 AM
Simplicity is best!
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Trevor M.
(K:160)
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/21/2007 8:16:07 AM
Someone is having a bit of fun!
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Robert Staeck
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/11/2007 4:22:49 PM
Robert,
What a moody composite.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Robert Staeck
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/8/2007 11:51:30 PM
Yutaka,
I should be Japan in November. I'll be staying in Kanagawa and I'd like to meet you if possible. Are you interested.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Terry Taylor
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/8/2007 7:49:39 PM
Yutaka,
Perhaps this abstract would be stonger as a Black and White. This would exploit the tones.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Yutaka Itinose
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/8/2007 7:47:40 PM
Yutaka,
What a wonderful still-life!
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Yutaka Itinose
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/8/2007 8:50:12 AM
Shirley,
Here's a link to the process: http://www.lexar.com/dp/tips_lessons/brandon_tritone.html
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Shirley D. Cross-Taylor
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/8/2007 8:34:00 AM
Shirley,
Here is a Tritone version. Hope you like it.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Shirley D. Cross-Taylor
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/8/2007 8:01:33 AM
Gareth,
One of my favorite parts of Tokyo! Nice Capture.
I'll be there in November.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: A Smith
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/8/2007 7:59:12 AM
Robert,
This is a good one with soft lighting and the composition using her reflection. I like the subtle seperation from the background as well.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Robert Staeck
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/8/2007 7:56:16 AM
Yutaka,
I like the use of the semi-focused foreground pattern and the strong color in the background to create a strong abstract composition.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Yutaka Itinose
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/8/2007 7:53:06 AM
Afriadi,
Nicely executed especially the composition. But I wish the buildings in the background were a bit brighter.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/8/2007 7:48:06 AM
Shirley,
I nicely execute long shutter shot! I wonder what this would look like as a Duotone or Tritone?
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Shirley D. Cross-Taylor
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/8/2007 6:49:04 AM
Sascha,
Of all the portraits in your portfolio this is my favorite. The expression, cropping, DOF and soft color pallette are most intriguing.
Your outdoor and existing light portraits are strong but your studio portraits (Sara) seem a bit underexposed.
Here is the final version (attached) of that portrait you commented on.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: sascha jonack
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/2/2007 9:03:36 AM
Andrew,
Nice use of lighting and composition.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Andrew Caldwell
(K:18307)
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/2/2007 9:01:50 AM
Gust@vo,
I appreciate the graphic nature of your image.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Gustavo Scheverin
(K:164501)
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/2/2007 8:59:57 AM
Shirley,
OK...Expose for highlights and use your histogram to see where your highlights and shadows fall. You've been shooting chrome, so it should come easy to you!
:)
Terry
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| Photo By: Terry Taylor
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/2/2007 8:51:50 AM
Shirley,
This looks like a still from a Kurosawa film! Nice!
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Shirley D. Cross-Taylor
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/2/2007 8:49:39 AM
Shirley,
One of my best pieces of advice is when using a digital camera is to be sure to turn it off before changing lenses. The sensor discharges and is less likely to attract dust.
Best of Luck,
Terry
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| Photo By: Terry Taylor
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/2/2007 8:42:47 AM
Shirley,
Film has/is serving you well. You have much more patience than I and perhaps a much faster computer as well to do so much scanning. I'd be shootng more film if I could afford it. I love my FM and F100 more than my D200! I miss shooting Fujifilms too. They are so satisfying.
Cheers,
Terry
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| Photo By: Terry Taylor
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Critique By:
Terry Taylor (K:1503)
7/2/2007 8:38:51 AM
Robert,
Perhaps this image would look more dramatic if it were in BW?
Nice, nonetheless. :)
Cheers,
Terry
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