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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
9/23/2004 6:17:02 AM
Thank you Carol. I was trying to experiment more with post-processing, and I found the radial blur worked quite nicely, though I had to recentre the shot to make it work.
Your feedback's always appreciated, thank you.
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Critique By:
Carol Cefalu (K:8388)
9/22/2004 5:43:06 AM
I'm getting dizzy!!!!!!!!!!!! lol...
nice effect here.
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
9/7/2004 9:27:57 AM
Thanks Dave. You're probably right, it was mostly an experiment, but it's probably a little too over the top. Thanks for your feedback.
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
9/7/2004 9:27:05 AM
Thanks Alison. I wasn't sure if it would work, it was mostly an experiment in some PS techniques more than anything else.
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Critique By:
z z (K:51)
9/6/2004 11:27:58 AM
Too much Photoshop for my taste.
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Critique By:
Opal (K:3826)
9/5/2004 1:40:34 PM
This is a neat shot. I wouldn't want to ask him to gas up the car.........................Opal
Thank you for your nice comment about my photo
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Critique By:
Alison DuFlon (K:36566)
9/5/2004 12:26:48 PM
Beautiful composition, the way you have given this an out of focus and a painting feel lends to the tiredness in this player, very nice. Alison
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
9/2/2004 5:42:34 AM
Thanks Carol, I always love getting feedback from you.
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
9/2/2004 5:41:54 AM
Thanks Tiro, I didn't even think of that. The only change I made was on the light levels, I probably should have done more. Your idea's a good one, and it would be good practice for my photoshop skills.
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Critique By:
Carol Cefalu (K:8388)
9/2/2004 5:32:00 AM
GREAT SHOT Dan!
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
8/28/2004 1:34:17 PM
It certainly could have been, and I'm glad it wasn't.
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Critique By:
Gabrielle Willson (K:7978)
8/28/2004 1:13:14 PM
It could have been a lot worse
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Critique By:
Tiro Leander (K:19060)
8/23/2004 7:57:31 AM
Sometimes this is a question i struggle with too... :-). Great mood in this one too.
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Critique By:
Tiro Leander (K:19060)
8/23/2004 7:56:42 AM
this is truly a great capture. A very happy moment, and the joy in her eyes is splendid. i would have used photoshop (or another toool) to blur out the T-shirt in the background more, the "buffalo" mark is a bit distracting, but this is just nitpicking. :-)
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
8/23/2004 7:21:01 AM
Thanks for the feedback. An interesting idea you had there, I can see what you mean. I'm surprised the image came out so well. It's a surprisingly clean look to the river, it often looks very brown (the mud gets stirred up constantly and never gets a chance to settle).
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
8/23/2004 7:17:56 AM
Thanks for your kind words.
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
8/23/2004 7:17:38 AM
Yes, she's certainly happy, I'm glad I managed to capture it so candidly. No, her name's Amelia, probably should have mentioned that. But the emotion is so open and frank, which is always nice to see.
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Critique By:
Alison DuFlon (K:36566)
8/22/2004 12:08:18 PM
Beautiful, nice warm candid portrait, she is defenitely giving off joy. Or is that her name? Alison
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Alison DuFlon (K:36566)
8/22/2004 12:04:52 PM
Interesting shot, before I read your description i though the darker area was where the river turned and this gave me the feeling of the water pulling you around the bend. Interesting to see the type of metal dock being used to reach these boats, beautiful lighting and great capture from a car. Alison
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
8/22/2004 3:35:49 AM
Thanks for the feedback Alison. I've taken your suggestion and edited so it is in the blurry image project. To be truthful, this is one of the first images I ever really photo'd, certainly in the first dozen or so. I find it fascinating how the fire can seem so liquid and fluid. The heart shapes are a lucky touch though, not sure how that happened 
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Critique By:
M. Leminski (K:1029)
8/22/2004 2:07:01 AM
Well captured!
Nice image!
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Critique By:
Alison DuFlon (K:36566)
8/20/2004 12:00:38 PM
A beautiful capture and great composition . It should have gone in the blurry image project. I like how he is out of fucus but with still enough detail to see the expression, the twist and turns of the fire are amazing, even heart shapes flying off the left top. Alison
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
8/20/2004 1:23:10 AM
Thanks Alison, good suggestion there. I wasn't sure if it would help or not, probably should have taken the shot a bit higher so the car is less obvious. And thanks for your feedback, much appreciated.
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Critique By:
Alison DuFlon (K:36566)
8/19/2004 2:30:05 PM
I like this alot, but I think I would have cropped out the inside of the car in the foreground, You have great lights going in all the directions leading your eye back to the center focal point. Alison
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
8/18/2004 1:12:08 AM
Thanks Carol, much obliged. I'll keep that in mind for future shots. I found it hard to time it and pose for it myself, and get it all right.
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Critique By:
Carol Cefalu (K:8388)
8/18/2004 1:07:58 AM
Great experimental shot! The only thing I don't
like is that fact that the feet are cut off..otherwise ot would be perfect in everyway!
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
8/17/2004 6:23:51 AM
Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated. I'm still trying to plug those holes in the curtains though, makes it hard to sleep in on the days you want to! But there's always some crack it gets through, no matter how hard I try.
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Critique By:
Timothy Schirmer (K:7201)
8/17/2004 6:20:21 AM
Great image. Love the light creeping in through the window. I know that feeling for sure. Tim
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
8/17/2004 2:03:58 AM
Thanks. The angle wasn't entirely by choice, not much you can do on the back seat of a car with the camera on a monopod, and you can't twist in your seat to see what you're shooting at. Blind luck, mostly
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Critique By:
Daniel Stratton (K:2144)
8/17/2004 2:00:29 AM
Thanks Carol! I probably shouldn't admit this, but I hadn't intended to take this shot, I'd only intended to focus and prep for a different one
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