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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
6/25/2005 4:56:39 PM
Excellent tones, color, and composition. Very sexy model and great pose immediately caught my attention. The look on the model's face is "mesmerizing", just fantastic.
The 105mm lens was a good choice...great portrait lens.
Excellent shot...great work
- John
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| Photo By: Johan Sorensen
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
6/22/2005 3:18:55 PM
Wow, talk about "the use of thirds"...excellent composition! Very good color and lighting too.
Great shot...nice work
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
6/6/2005 3:43:23 PM
Afriadi;
I really like the use of the empty dark space, attracive model, and cute/catching pose. She looks like she's wearing some nice contracting colors. I think if the light was a little stronger on her, it might bring out the colors.
Nice Shot
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
5/23/2005 3:14:29 PM
Wow...fantastic. Great colors, composition, and lighting & tone.
Good work
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
(K:2216)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
5/6/2005 3:32:59 PM
Very nice portrait. The vivid color is what immediately caught my attention. Beautiful model and good use of DOF really make this shot...nice work.
This shot made be check out the rest of your portfolio...very nice work.
- John
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| Photo By: sydney lucas
(K:127)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
3/30/2005 3:23:28 PM
Agree with Kiarang, a little over exposed, her top looks "washed out." Very good use of DOF, really bring her into focus. Attractive model and nice pose.
Nice B&W, good work...
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
(K:2216)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
3/6/2005 7:00:13 AM
Excellent prospective and colors...nice framing.
Nice shot
- John
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Photo By: Steve Williams
(K:1341)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
2/8/2005 3:37:44 PM
A very nice B&W shot...I don't think it would have the same "feeling" in color. Good composition too.
Nice work
- John
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| Photo By: Rachel Tomes
(K:0)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
1/23/2005 5:05:02 PM
I think I like this shot better than the first one (|o)...she has a "playful" expression which brings out her face.
Both shots are well done.
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
(K:2216)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
1/23/2005 5:01:45 PM
Great B&W street shot. The perspective/angle is what caught my attention...well done. Pretty model with a natural/relaxed pose also helps this shot.
nice work
- John
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| Photo By: Pawel Chrzanowski
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
1/6/2005 4:03:48 PM
Afriadi;
Fantastic shot! The bright, contrasting colors immediately caught my attention. A beautiful model, great pose, excellent use of reflection, and very good composition make a great shot. The look in her eyes is simply stunning...fantastic
GREAT shot
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/31/2004 8:33:17 PM
Ngythanh;
Great composition and colors. The color tone really set the mood of the shot...I think you captured some of your youthful past.
- John
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| Photo By: ngythanh
(K:430)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/28/2004 3:40:44 PM
Igor & Alastair;
Thank you for your comments...it's constructive comments like this that help me take better shots.
- John
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| Photo By: John Truchon
(K:1557)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/28/2004 3:30:45 PM
Len;
Thanks for the comments, and agree...a great subject too shoot.
This shot was taken this September.
- John
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| Photo By: John Truchon
(K:1557)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/6/2004 12:41:57 PM
Very good use of DOF, makes the subject really stand out. Also, good composition and colors.
Nice shot
- John
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| Photo By: Denzil Jayasinghe
(K:704)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/3/2004 12:58:57 PM
Great pose and composition...very effective.
Very nice shot
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
(K:2216)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/2/2004 12:40:49 PM
Robbie;
Not an easy shot with the sun in the background, but you really made it work...very nice shot. Nice pose and GREAT composition.
nice work
- John
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| Photo By: J Dillon
(K:1426)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/2/2004 12:30:54 AM
Ed;
Titles aren't usually what catch my attention, but looking at this picture and then seeing the title...it immediately grab my attention and made me look closer at this shot. Good use of DOF, nice shot
- John
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| Photo By: ed lawson
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
12/1/2004 12:39:14 PM
Afriadi;
Very nice contrasting colors, I think it really makes the model stand out. Nice pose too. I disagree with the above post about the "blur" on the pipe. In fact, I think a little less DOF would blur the back ground and make the model stand out more...
Nice shot
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
(K:2216)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
11/22/2004 3:33:57 AM
Nice perspective, really shows the depth and magnitude. Curious about the color, is that natural, what they really look like..?
Thanks for the additional information, very interesting. Visiting China and seeing the Terra Cotta Warriors is one of my next trips.
Nice work
- John
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| Photo By: ngythanh
(K:430)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
11/21/2004 6:01:27 PM
Nice work Brad. Simple and elegant. Nice details and good choice for a B&W. I also like the cropping, makes you focus on the details.
- John
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| Photo By: Brad Morris
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
11/20/2004 3:16:19 AM
I'm glad you listened to your your wife...this is a nice shot. Very vivid colors and "cute" pose makes this shot stand out.
Yes, I agree the shadows "stripe" are a little distracting. Also, are the skin tones natural or did they get changed with editing..?
Anyway, this shot made me look at the rest of your portfolio...you have a good eye...nice work
- John
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| Photo By: ngythanh
(K:430)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
11/18/2004 3:16:17 PM
The simply stunning pose and vivid colors make this a wonderful shot. Nice job on keep the skin tones natural, not always easy. Good job on the cropping too.
Beautiful model and great shot.
- John
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| Photo By: Gilo De Gili
(K:816)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
11/14/2004 4:59:51 PM
I really like the perspective of this shot, great angle. This is a great B&W, I don't think it would be as "strong" of an image in color, IMHO anyway.
Nice work.
- John
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| Photo By: Ján HRONSKÝ alias ?ltý D
(K:1292)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
11/14/2004 5:44:40 AM
Leonid;
Great colors and I really like the pose and expresion...very beautiful model too. I see this was shot with a 50mm/1.8, very reliable lens.
Nice work
- John
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| Photo By: Leonid Slutsky
(K:35)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
11/14/2004 5:36:25 AM
Jonathan;
I really like the pose, colors, and setting of this shot. The contrasting colors immediately caught my attention. The only thing I would fix is the overexposure on the sweather...looks a little "washed out."
Nice shot
- John
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| Photo By: Jonathan Wollin
(K:958)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
11/11/2004 4:54:45 PM
Nice vivid colors and a "playful" pose. Of course a beautiful model...I'm sure here parents will be pleased.
very nice shot and good addition to your portfolio
- John
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| Photo By: Gilo De Gili
(K:816)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
11/9/2004 4:51:50 AM
Richie;
Great portrait shot. I think the B&W really makes this shot...it immediately caught my attention. Very good details from your Sigma 70-300, are you happy with that lense..?
Very nice work.
- John
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| Photo By: Twisted Rich
(K:691)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
11/4/2004 3:10:41 PM
Wonderful color, it immediately caught my attention.
Nice capture
- john
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| Photo By: David Adamson
(K:118)
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Critique By:
John Truchon (K:1557)
10/27/2004 10:34:27 PM
Afriadi;
Great B&W shot, I think the B&W really makes this picture. Wonderful pose too. I think Amanda said it best, "sexy and playful."
Nice work
- John
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| Photo By: Afriadi Hikmal
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