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Critique By:
Bryce Hughes (K:2957)
3/4/2003 7:37:31 PM
cool Richard, not meaning to be rude or anything but could he have done a better trick? to make it more intersting?
just a thought
nice idea though 
composition is great in my eyes
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Critique By:
Richard Ivan (K:512)
1/24/2003 2:13:06 PM
Thanks for your feedback AJ. Its helpful to receive and construstive comments.
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Critique By:
Sue O'S (K:12878)
1/21/2003 10:30:06 AM
I think Maggie is talking about Phil Cohen's image.
http://www.usefilm.com/showphoto.php?id=24939
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Critique By:
M.M. Meehan (K:3751)
1/20/2003 9:33:52 PM
I like the light on the shot. If the grey background was whiter the photo might jump off the page a little better. There is an editors choice called the non-conformist with 3 blue bottles and one red one. If you browse through the editor's choice you will see it. You are not that far off a very good shot on this one. Keep shootin'
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Critique By:
Deleted User (K:4598)
1/20/2003 6:45:14 PM
I like the shape, shadows and the colors of this still life. The two small nits are that I'd like to see the objects not so evenly spaced which might this a little more fluid and I'd clone out that small dark spot top right. Otherwise this is a good, solid capture.
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Critique By:
Richard Ivan (K:512)
1/20/2003 5:55:00 PM
Its not that great of a shot but I need feedback on how to shoot stills.
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Critique By:
AJ Haselwood (K:2148)
1/20/2003 10:19:42 AM
Not a bad image. It is just the top two flowers on the right are blasted out and the lower right background is a bit distracting.
aj
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Critique By:
Richard Ivan (K:512)
1/20/2003 5:07:10 AM
Or I could tie die her. Haha.
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Critique By:
Scott Grewe (K:541)
1/20/2003 5:03:02 AM
THIS is contrast... now Richard all you gotta do is go out and find a pink cat.
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Critique By:
Scott Grewe (K:541)
1/20/2003 4:51:07 AM
I think its an okay photo. I rated it like a 5, but I definetley don't think that the Contrast is a good thing about this photo.
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Critique By:
Glenn Stamp (K:148)
1/19/2003 9:30:52 PM
Looks good,the contrast is really good
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Critique By:
Glenn Stamp (K:148)
1/19/2003 9:00:00 PM
Kind of grainy but good photo
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Critique By:
Richard Ivan (K:512)
1/18/2003 11:36:23 AM
thanks scott
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Critique By:
Scott Grewe (K:541)
1/18/2003 6:14:41 AM
It is still a little grainy... I dont really know how to get rid of it but maybe we'll shoot still life under a bright light today,or I'll bring over the Flash.
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Critique By:
Scott Grewe (K:541)
1/18/2003 6:13:56 AM
It is still a little grainy... I dont really know how to get rid of it but maybe we'll shoot still life under a bright light today,or I'll bring over the Flash.
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Critique By:
Scott Grewe (K:541)
1/18/2003 6:09:59 AM
Great Photo Rich... I think that the Black and White makes the photo.
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Critique By:
Richard Ivan (K:512)
1/18/2003 4:27:26 AM
Yea Ill give it a try today in Photoshop.
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Critique By:
Scott Grewe (K:541)
1/17/2003 8:05:38 PM
But now about the photo... I like it... Like a man said to me One time "don't usee this effect often, it is over used" but you did a DAMN good job... Its stands out at me...good photo. i think i gave you an "8"
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Critique By:
Glenn Stamp (K:148)
1/17/2003 7:06:42 PM
Richard, You should fix it up in photo shop
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Critique By:
Glenn Stamp (K:148)
1/17/2003 6:58:36 PM
nice picture richard
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Critique By:
Scott Grewe (K:541)
1/17/2003 6:04:09 PM
oh yeah and i also got that Shallow D.O.F. photo with you and your camera. Enjoy!
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Critique By:
Scott Grewe (K:541)
1/17/2003 6:03:41 PM
oh yeah and i also got that Shallow D.O.F. photo with you and your camera. Enjoy!
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Critique By:
Scott Grewe (K:541)
1/17/2003 6:01:03 PM
I like It!But moreover guess what i found... Remember when i shot the roll on the Nikomat? Well i found like 5 Photos identical to "Sunnydale Sunset" I guess i had the Idea before Everyone... MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. you can do yours again though i wont use it... C ya
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Critique By:
Glenn Stamp (K:148)
1/12/2003 1:46:46 PM
Cool Picture Richard
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Critique By:
Richard Ivan (K:512)
1/6/2003 5:57:11 PM
haha scott
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Critique By:
Scott Grewe (K:541)
1/4/2003 6:20:06 PM
Nice P{icture of me buddy... tell them other Richard Ivans to whip into shape...sheesh... if they have to have the same name why dont they add some more PHOTOS?
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Critique By:
Daniel Jarrett (K:612)
1/4/2003 10:51:45 AM
You can get a slide scanner at any camera store or mayeb some electronic stores....try getting on a web site maybe. And no, photoshop is not easy to use...i have many books on photoshop. Photography is a very expensive hobby, this past year ive spent about 2 grand on a 2 cameras, a scanner, printer, and another $500 on my darkroom.
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Critique By:
Richard Ivan (K:512)
1/4/2003 8:57:22 AM
where can i get a slide scanner
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Critique By:
Daniel Jarrett (K:612)
1/4/2003 8:25:50 AM
photoshop is made by adobe...it's called "Adobe Photoshop" for a reason. You can buy it at best buy for about $400. And when you get your SLR you should get a slide scanner for high quality scans....they cost abour $200+.
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Critique By:
Richard Ivan (K:512)
1/4/2003 5:49:36 AM
What would be a good photoshop that I could use? Adobe? How much do they cost?
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