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Critique By:
aaron lucy (K:611)
11/23/2004 12:46:58 AM
Very cool shot, I like this a lot.
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Critique By:
matthew hoffman (K:658)
9/18/2004 3:38:06 PM
I like the potential of this shot, but I agree it is too dark. I hope you don't mind, but I edited it a little in photoshop. I just increased the contrast and brightness a little, and used a little unsharp mask on it. What do you think?
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Critique By:
matthew hoffman (K:658)
9/18/2004 3:30:47 PM
This is what I strive to photograph my self! Nice shot, as usual well composed, and excellent contrast. The only thing I might suggest is to crop off the extreme right hand side where the brick changes. It slightly throws off the balance of the image.
Regards,
Matt
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Critique By:
matthew hoffman (K:658)
9/18/2004 3:24:38 PM
I agree with Massimo, Jeremy. The composition is excellent, if only you didn't have that car in the shot. It does look a little overexposed, probably a result of direct strong sunlight (this was taken in winter, right? The sun is actually STRONGER in winter than in summer.) and a light wall. If you could quicken your shutter speed a bit, you would limit the overexposure.
Again, though, you have a great eye for composition, something most people have some trouble with.
Regards,
Matt
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Critique By:
matthew hoffman (K:658)
9/18/2004 3:19:04 PM
Wonderful image. Do you use photoshop? I ask because the picture almost looks TOO sharp, as if you had applied an unsharp mask. Just a comment.
The picutre is well composed, and although the window is a little overexposed, I think it works here.
This is my favorite subject matter. Keep up the good work!
Regards,
Matt
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Critique By:
lowell whipple girbes (K:13151)
12/7/2003 5:53:42 PM
i like it
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Critique By:
m.c. lopez (K:14766)
12/7/2003 2:11:31 PM
you apreciate those lights
and you capture them very well !
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Critique By:
m.c. lopez (K:14766)
12/7/2003 2:10:11 PM
nice tones and mood
very good job - i think it could have been better yet with your 50mm !
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Critique By:
m.c. lopez (K:14766)
12/7/2003 2:08:17 PM
i like it
interesting angle again !
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Critique By:
m.c. lopez (K:14766)
12/7/2003 2:07:09 PM
if you go higher, the lights are beter yet !
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Critique By:
m.c. lopez (K:14766)
12/7/2003 2:05:43 PM
amazing !
interesting angle !
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Critique By:
Harlan Heald (K:15732)
11/15/2003 7:04:46 AM
Interesting vehicular abstract! Next time, you might want to move in closer and capture just the textures and shadows, or else crop a bit tighter. Good eye!
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Critique By:
Harlan Heald (K:15732)
11/15/2003 6:57:07 AM
Nicely composed and captured! Very good shadow play!
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Critique By:
Carla Sie (K:2057)
11/14/2003 12:20:05 PM
hi, jeremy!
Thanx for the comment You've left about my moon! But I don't have a telescope... Thanx anyway! Today I posted a cat, if you have time, please visit it!
Regards,
carla
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Critique By:
B:)liana (K:30945)
11/14/2003 7:11:28 AM
Loveley cat!
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Critique By:
Sandra Berry (K:8352)
11/13/2003 5:18:54 PM
The capture of his expression and stance is very good, Focus and detail are good on the face, a bit soft on the edges of his body, Best Regards, Sandra
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Critique By:
Carla Sie (K:2057)
11/13/2003 5:10:45 PM
Beautiful!! Great shot!
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Critique By:
Barbara Bremigan (K:1164)
11/13/2003 5:00:47 PM
I like the montage of colors and textures.
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Critique By:
Adelino Barreto (K:12661)
11/7/2003 2:12:48 PM
Intresting.Regards.
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Critique By:
Michael Alexander (K:5293)
10/24/2003 11:53:15 AM
Brilliant
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Critique By:
buzz kill (K:1808)
10/7/2003 7:35:58 PM
I like it... maybe a litte overexposed on the window?
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Critique By:
Thom Stevenson (K:132)
10/7/2003 7:08:16 PM
Good job with lighting on a subject with very wide dynamic range, and excellent scan. I like this shot a lot!
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Critique By:
John Hatziemmanouil (K:40580)
10/3/2003 10:59:10 PM
Yes! This object (sorry, I don't know the english word) is very nice or shoting! I like it so the composition with the background that (the building) also looks from long time at the past! The texture on it looks pretty good so the main object that is good. The sunlight support it perfectly! Also the green ground gives a different tone in the colours of the photo, a more strong I can say and that is nice. The last one, I like how the objects are in the photo. The right place for the window! Best regards, JH.
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Critique By:
John Hatziemmanouil (K:40580)
10/3/2003 10:56:11 PM
Well Jeremy.... I cannot say that I am a......'''lover''' of spyders however I must say that your close up is pretty good. I think this spyder must be very small so the focus is pretty good for this distance. Very good!
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Critique By:
xy x (K:41915)
10/3/2003 1:20:35 PM
nice moment, great work
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Critique By:
Finn Kristensen (K:1230)
10/2/2003 11:36:50 PM
Very well composed, i like the old-fashioned look, the lighting is good but a little soft focus, the leafs upper right is a little distracting imo. Regards
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Critique By:
Kaj Nielsen (K:15279)
10/2/2003 10:11:06 PM
Excellent compoced, excellent light and great color...........regards KJaj Nielsen
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Critique By:
Ricardo Farias (K:996)
10/2/2003 9:11:02 PM
I like your image, looks like a paint.
Nicely done..Congrats
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Critique By:
Teunis Haveman (K:37426)
10/1/2003 2:28:41 PM
Beautiful Macro
Teunis
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Critique By:
Katia Cutrone (K:12940)
9/30/2003 11:37:41 AM
I like the crop on the hands. (You should have a look at the pics of Paolo De Maio, and You'll discover two far away culture, but the same details)
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