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Critique By:
antonio toscano (K:1402)
2/22/2007 1:59:27 PM
esta es una foto, donde me encanta oda ella, lograste el angulo, expresion y mirada que asesinan a cualquiera, saludos desde s.l.p.
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Critique By:
antonio toscano (K:1402)
2/22/2007 1:58:15 PM
en esta toma que me encanta por supuesto, pidele a la modelo que cruce su pierna derecha sobre la izquierda, le da mas robustes a su cuerpo, fabulosa toma.
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Critique By:
antonio toscano (K:1402)
2/22/2007 1:56:49 PM
buena toma,expresion unica de la modelo, te mando saludos desde san luis potosi, el corte le va bien
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Critique By:
metoni . (K:24727)
2/9/2007 7:27:12 AM
Nice portrait
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Critique By:
muzongo ! (K:56)
2/9/2007 2:33:12 AM
and here it goes my last option not posted for the same reason as the other one... regards
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muzongo ! (K:56)
2/9/2007 2:31:27 AM
thanks again for keeping track of the series. I was unsure about which image to post. This was one of my other options... I did like it more than "Fernanda 5" but unfortunately I didn't frame the image well and her incomplete leg at the right side was kind of annoying for me... what do you think?
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Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/9/2007 1:32:06 AM
...and thanks for sharing! That was an enjoyable session to view, and a very cute model indeed.
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Sergio Cárdenas (K:25028)
2/9/2007 12:55:31 AM
Fantastico retrato y hermosa modelo!
Saludos!
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Alain Mijngheer (K:11733)
2/8/2007 7:14:14 PM
Hi Muzongo,
I've got a CRT too and black is detailless. Sorry:(
Concerning the crop I would have cut more of the left part.
Keep it up :)
Alain
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Jan Hoffman (K:39467)
2/8/2007 7:12:29 PM
Wow! What a stunner; I like the original so much more! And I can see all the detail in the hair, too!.
By the way, I am using a hign-end plasma screen today with MS Vista O/S and high end video card.
--Jan
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muzongo ! (K:56)
2/8/2007 7:05:05 PM
Thanks for the feedback Jan. I'm still worried about all of you seeing the photo so dark. I swear I can see a detailed pic on my screen! lol... well... I have attached the original photo as it came out from my camera. The tight crop's intention is to stand out the model's beautiful eyes and to give a movie-like kind of shot. Thanks again for your comments!
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Jan Hoffman (K:39467)
2/8/2007 6:34:27 PM
Beautiful subject and well taken but I have to agree with Paul about the blacks (hair) and the crop. The crop is bit too extreme for me but despite any of these minor points the subjects stunning beauty (those eyes!) saves the day and you did pretty good, too. :) :)
--Jan
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Maria Luisa Vial (K:36017)
2/8/2007 3:34:55 PM
Excelente!!! Me encanta su expresión y muy bien aislada...
Escribeme a mi email: mariavial@hotmail.com para que platiquemos...
Ma. Luisa
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Dzenan Karac (K:-217)
2/8/2007 12:56:22 PM
This so nice picture,contrast on her fase is very well teken....
I'm enjoing in this look
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muzongo ! (K:56)
2/8/2007 12:42:33 PM
thanks again paul!
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/8/2007 12:15:10 PM
I'm looking at it on a CRT in a dark room, and there's no detail.
I wanted to say I'm really enjoying your work!
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muzongo ! (K:56)
2/8/2007 12:13:49 PM
I took a full head shot in the beginning, but I felt like this crop would make the shot a little more intimate. About the blacks I was affraid this would happen.... I believe I see the details perfectly in my plasma monitor... Thanks for the feedback!
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/8/2007 12:08:46 PM
I'm not sure. I think square would have been ok, but this is a little TOO horizontal for me. Still pretty, though.
I think the blacks have been crushed too much, removing all detail from her hair.
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Critique By:
Jim Budrakey (K:24393)
2/8/2007 5:27:24 AM
I like the contrast of the model against the light background and you captured her eyes beautifuly. However, I find the crop of the top of her head to be disturbing. I keep wanting to see her whole head.
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Critique By:
Alicia Popp (K:87532)
2/7/2007 1:04:49 AM
Encantadora modelo y precioso retrato. Personalmente no le hubiera recortado la cabeza, pero es mi opinión
Es una bella imagen!
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Critique By:
sascha jonack (K:19715)
2/7/2007 1:02:53 AM
Beautiful eyes. Nice posture of her. Well done.
Sascha
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/6/2007 1:19:23 PM
A blue cast is something to look for whenever you are shooting in open shade, as now your primary light source is the blue sky and not the warm sun.
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Critique By:
muzongo ! (K:56)
2/6/2007 1:08:48 PM
it looks stronger paul! thanks for the feedback! =)
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/6/2007 12:56:52 PM
As nice as this photo is, it could easily be much stronger by removing the blue color-cast on her skin. See the difference?
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/6/2007 4:59:03 AM
It looks like you two had fun. Nice shot.
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/6/2007 4:56:57 AM
Wow, what a strong capture of a beautiful model!
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
2/6/2007 2:26:16 AM
Muy lindo retrato, interesante encuadre.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Alfredo Piñeyro (K:6609)
2/6/2007 1:52:53 AM
Muy buena captura!!! Los tonos de la piel son perfectos. La luz es muy buena y la modelo muy bonita. Felicitaciones!!!:)
AP
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
2/6/2007 1:34:25 AM
Oh, I LIKE this shot!
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Critique By:
Tom Ross (K:6453)
2/6/2007 1:00:56 AM
Lots of impact, great skin tone.
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