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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/22/2001 5:56:51 PM
I love the composition, but wish the lighting was not so contrasty. Looks like midday light, could you shoot in this in the late morning/afternoon?
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Photo By: Tony Smallman
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/22/2001 5:52:27 PM
I agree with Chris the plant doesn't grab me.
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| Photo By: Tony Smallman
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/22/2001 5:02:15 PM
Welcome to Usefilm Kelly. I like the swing very much. The branch in the upper left distracts IMO. I really love you you filled your upper right corner with the line of the clouds, which draws you in nicely.
I wouldn't crop the branch, but rather recompose the scene to not have the branch included in the image.
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| Photo By: Kelly Burgess
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/22/2001 5:30:33 AM
I bet the rock bands in your area love you. If I were in a rock band, this is the kind of setting I'd want to be in. Hard, graffti, trashy, and dirty. Well done. Love the light coming through the windows.
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| Photo By: Martin Mora
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/22/2001 2:52:38 AM
Nice depth Pierre. Color looks a bit flat, could be the light or film choice. What film did you use?
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| Photo By: Pierre Slabber
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/22/2001 2:49:04 AM
Great framing and color. You want at the right time of year. With every waterfall named, "bridal veil", where was this taken?
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| Photo By: Martin Mora
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/21/2001 5:49:19 PM
Mord, this is a very interesting photo. I enjoy infra-red and especailly when it has been done so well. I wonder how this would look without the tree/leaves in the left of your frame. I would like to see the flow of the clouds and the river mirror each other throughout the photo. The person works very well in this shot. Well done.
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| Photo By: Martin Mora
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/21/2001 5:48:37 PM
Mord, this is a very interesting photo. I enjoy infra-red and especailly when it has been done so well. I wonder how this would look without the tree/leaves in the left of your frame. I would like to see the flow of the clouds and the river mirror each other throughout the photo. The person works very well in this shot. Well done.
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| Photo By: Martin Mora
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/21/2001 5:41:01 PM
Again your timing with these horses is stellar. Excellent balance in their positions. I don't mind the blue, it is certainly different.
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| Photo By: Tony Smallman
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/21/2001 5:34:48 PM
Love the positioning of the horses. The foreground grass has pleasant color as well as the rest of the tones in your photo. Looks soft on my monitor, probably the scan.
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| Photo By: Tony Smallman
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/21/2001 6:04:20 AM
Lovely. Now, is that where the Hobbit lives?
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| Photo By: Sylvia Jones
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/21/2001 3:16:55 AM
This is a cool shot and the color is very effective. Well done, John.
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| Photo By: John Charlton
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/19/2001 11:47:52 PM
Nice candid grab. 
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| Photo By: Ray Wearn
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/19/2001 11:45:34 PM
Well exposed under difficult conditions. I enjoy this one.
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| Photo By: Martin Mora
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/19/2001 11:41:27 PM
Nice flow with the water. You could have a stronger composition. It looks like you have another part of the falls through the trees?!? If so, I bet it could look quite nice with the water in the foreground and the falls through the trees in the background.
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| Photo By: nathan combs
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/18/2001 6:01:40 PM
It is a nice idea. I would tighten up your framing, so you still have the texture of the cabin wall, yet can identify the tree better in the frame.
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| Photo By: Mike Allebach
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/17/2001 7:07:51 AM
Freedom is another word that describes this picture for me. Agree with Al on the dodging of the face. Nicely captured.
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| Photo By: Chris Blaszczyk
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/16/2001 8:59:08 AM
I agree with the above. You are certainly getting better, keep it up. Believe me, it takes time. Look at Artie's and Alex's posts of people and study what they're seeing. You should be able to learn a lot from these pros.
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| Photo By: Greg Pauline
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/13/2001 1:56:36 AM
Chris said it all. A nice texture shot Phillipe.
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| Photo By: Philippe Talbot
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/12/2001 11:05:53 PM
Cool idea. Next time move your sister to the left so she doesn't blend with the building. Get her in focus too.
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| Photo By: Greg Pauline
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/12/2001 10:05:22 PM
White sky and deep shadows do not help this shot. Composition needs work. Wait for the right light maybe some clouds to add texture to the background. Foreground light on the church and look for different angles.
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| Photo By: Greg Pauline
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/11/2001 9:49:36 PM
Fantastic use of space and brilliant color. Well done.
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| Photo By: Panos Asproulis
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/11/2001 8:46:16 AM
I like the cropping. Much better.
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| Photo By: Ray Wearn
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/11/2001 8:27:24 AM
Lovely mate  A perfect moment in time.
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| Photo By: Charles Curry-Hyde
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/9/2001 8:44:36 PM
I like it too. Nice composition, Mike. The shado down the steps is nice.
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| Photo By: Mike Allebach
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/9/2001 7:48:14 PM
I'm not sure what you wanted in this shot.
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| Photo By: Greg Pauline
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/9/2001 5:37:19 PM
I agree with Artie. The willow is a good choice for infrared film. Composition could be stronger though.
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| Photo By: Cathy Heidemann
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/9/2001 5:39:02 AM
I agree with Chris, it is a nice merge. My old stomping grounds, looks like you got this one from West Seattle. It would be stronger if you had the image with a bit more height. I'd like to see more sky and the builing not cut off the top. Probably a fun shot to try at twilight.
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| Photo By: Pierre Slabber
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/6/2001 7:09:35 PM
Lovely textures
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| Photo By: Tony Smallman
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Critique By:
Joe Blow (K:1918)
7/5/2001 11:54:48 PM
Clouds balance the image nicely. Interesting composition. As Gary said the color is great.
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| Photo By: Andy Whitney
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