|
|
Critique By:
mousa Jubran (K:5780)
10/17/2008 10:48:52 PM
Great picture
I enjoyed seeing them. Liked very
Accept my sincere greetings.
musa
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Bob Wallace (K:698)
7/5/2006 7:06:57 AM
As others have said, you did a very good job of capturing the dog's movement in this image.
I don't care for the dark band at the top of the image and I think there's too much blurred grass and not enough dog.
I tried a crop wherein I cut down tight on the dog, removing top, bottom, and left while leaving him room to run on the right.
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Jon Slater (K:1340)
7/5/2006 2:09:50 AM
Hi Bob,
Thanks for your critique, all good points, and the cropped version is better indeed.
Jon
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Bob Wallace (K:698)
7/4/2006 11:14:42 PM
This is a good capture in many ways but it doesn't really grab me. And that suggests that you were 'close enough'.
If you crop down significantly you can make the eagle more dominant. I'm posting a cropped version.
I also darkened a few spots that seemed pull my eye away from the subject and sharpened the fir branch on the left. You might also try some careful dodging on the bird's head to reduce the effect of the shadow.
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Dave Stacey (K:150877)
6/13/2006 5:58:20 AM
Just an excellent series of shots, Jon! Well done!
Dave.
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Dave Stacey (K:150877)
6/13/2006 5:57:44 AM
Great shot of this nest and the babies, Jon! The Christmas light is an excellent way to show the scale, too! Incredible shot!
Dave.
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Dave Stacey (K:150877)
6/13/2006 5:56:04 AM
Fantastic closeup of this little hummer, Jon! Great clarity and details!
Dave.
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
6/13/2006 4:45:30 AM
Bonita captura.
Felicitaciones!
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Marco Postiglione (K:471)
5/17/2006 10:36:04 AM
Good moment, but the bird is out of focus while the bulb is ok.
Try again becouse the idea is really good.
Well done. Marco.
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Naomi Weidner (K:6636)
4/1/2006 6:13:34 PM
Nice close up. I like the contrast of the soft curves of the fluff and the harder straight lines going into the middle. -- Naomi
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Mark Sherman (K:15669)
3/27/2006 3:48:36 AM
These drops on the upper right almost look like eye's especially with the fogyish white background. Reminds me of the animation style of "Spirited Away".
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Rachel Leah (K:26110)
3/27/2006 3:45:41 AM
Great close-up! It looks so cool, you did a nice job! 
~Rachel~
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Zé Ovo (K:7579)
2/27/2006 7:57:17 PM
wonderful details!
very nice composition and colours!
regards from Brazil!
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
abhra aich (K:8830)
11/16/2005 5:52:32 AM
wonderful.amazing to look at.well done.regards.abhra.
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
A Vas (K:326)
10/20/2005 8:00:41 AM
A scene from Matrix?
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Cary Shaffer (K:9269)
10/20/2005 5:26:43 AM
beats me too Jon, but it's a pretty cool image, CAry
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Jim Budrakey (K:24393)
10/20/2005 5:23:47 AM
Mylar? Very interesting abstract. Nice work.
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Darlene Boucher (K:15739)
10/12/2005 9:04:01 PM
Great shot Jon! And you're right, he does look like he's cleaning his teeth and getting ready for the next feeding! Wonderful image!
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Golnaz Beheshti (K:164)
10/3/2005 7:39:02 AM
good moment
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
ken krishnan (K:19102)
9/24/2005 10:12:19 PM
Jon,
A lovely homestead. Looks and feels warm.
regards,
ken.
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
mustafa Karaçelebi (K:1139)
9/23/2005 7:01:26 PM
Hi jon,I'm happy that you visit my photos and you writing comment. Thank you. You have very nice shots that I like to much.
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Margaret Sturgess (K:49403)
9/19/2005 9:53:31 PM
JOn I like this, love the sky and the twinkling light in the windows. I think possiby a bit of cropping off the bottom might give more impact - but I am so nosey, I brightened it bit to get a better look Hope you don't mind.
Margaret
Thank you for your comment, have uploaded the follow on shot - showing the diver feeding the fish
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
mustafa Karaçelebi (K:1139)
9/19/2005 9:07:25 AM
Exslend photo my ferend,
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
mary karimi (K:10818)
9/18/2005 7:12:06 AM
hi Jon
very Beautiful night...that home gives me a very calm and serene atmosphere.
mary
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
ken krishnan (K:19102)
9/7/2005 3:20:28 PM
Nice one.
Would love to fly one of these some day.
regards,
ken
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
ken krishnan (K:19102)
9/7/2005 3:15:13 PM
Jon,
Air shows are always a treat.
Excellent capture. Not a cloud in the sky and the smoke adds up to the charm.
Nice one
regards,
ken.
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Selda Besir (K:172)
9/7/2005 8:56:35 AM
love
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Henk-Jan Kooiman (K:-129)
8/10/2005 11:56:31 PM
Looks nice, but not very sharp!
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
boubekeur boukerma (K:2623)
8/10/2005 3:30:19 PM
Well captured and opened corner giving the movement idea.
I would prefer less noise but nice picture
Boubékeur
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
|
Critique By:
Gabriella Carta (K:22879)
8/10/2005 8:16:15 AM
wowwwwwwwww... wonderful!!
|
| Photo By: Jon Slater
(K:1340)
|
|
