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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
8/5/2005 5:32:53 PM
I think b&w would've made this picture more dramatic....
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| Photo By: Amy Hutteman
(K:44)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
8/2/2004 11:30:38 AM
Well done on an excellent B&W portrait. The pose / composition is also very pleasing. The only thing that i don't like it the way you used the DoF to make her face stand out... it looks as if her face was stuck onto another piture.
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| Photo By: Pawel Chrzanowski
(K:453)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
7/22/2004 9:13:33 AM
Well done! Nice work with the depth-of-field and also a very pleasing composition.
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Photo By: Jim Budrakey
(K:24393)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
7/13/2004 10:47:35 AM
This is a very well composed image. The 'background' stuff on the piano is a bit destracting though.
I think this image would even be more better in B&W.
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| Photo By: Piero D'Orto
(K:2451)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
7/13/2004 9:50:53 AM
What a dynamic shot... very strong! A picture that says a thousand words.
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| Photo By: daíven rizz
(K:650)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
7/13/2004 6:56:01 AM
I like these kind of photos. The only thing that i battle with is the hazy look of the sky - all washed out. What Mary said makes sense to me... if i understand her correctly. You'll see less of the sky (if at all). Don't get me wrong, i think your composition is great - subject is well framed. But if one can get rid of the washed out sky, why not?
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| Photo By: Roger Skinner
(K:81846)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
7/13/2004 6:44:03 AM
Yup, the reflections makes this a wonderful photo. All of them different shades/colors... no why does mine not come out like this??
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| Photo By: Raquel Osorio
(K:947)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
7/13/2004 6:42:17 AM
Yup, after i enlarged the photo it looked much better. The only thing that put's me off is the busy background. I know it was only i snap shot (very nice one though), but he doesn't stand out...
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| Photo By: Kingsley Orsmond
(K:369)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
7/13/2004 6:36:55 AM
I love this picture... The only negative is the not-so-level horizon & overexposed wave, but the little girls facial expression and reflection more than makes up for it.
Excellent photo... hope you have it up on a wall somewhere
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| Photo By: Igor Dashevskiy
(K:293)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
7/12/2004 10:08:32 AM
To much open space at the top (for my liking). Otherwise this was a very nice idea, maybe you must go back and try to get them a bit more sharper...
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| Photo By: scott sheehan
(K:62)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
7/12/2004 10:04:41 AM
What a lovely picture. The yellow is very nice and adds a lot to the picture.
Have you tried this in B&W... i know you will loose the nice yellow, but the small leaves have a lot of wonderful lines that will be enhanced with B&W.
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| Photo By: Tommaso Razzano
(K:8073)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
5/31/2004 9:55:22 AM
This is very diffucult lighting... washed out in the top left corner and 'dark' sand in the bottom right corner. The horizon could also be a bit more level.
But none the less, this ramains a beautiful image... well done.
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| Photo By: gregory J. mclemore
(K:1810)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
4/16/2004 7:16:29 AM
The composition is fantastic... so pleasing on the eye, well done.
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| Photo By: Orazio Minnella
(K:49417)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
4/16/2004 6:59:13 AM
A very beautiful sunset. I agree that the two figures add that all important perspective to the overall image, well done. The only thing that doesn’t add up for me is the 10 second shutter speed. With such a long shutter I don’t think one would’ve seen any waves??
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| Photo By: Arthur Yeo
(K:890)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
4/8/2004 5:08:31 AM
...but what a snap shot. I especially like the lighting in this shot.
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| Photo By: edmond lisy
(K:10311)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
4/8/2004 5:00:48 AM
i like it... i like it a lot. Maybe i would've kept the background sharp in focus (not that there's anything wrong with this one)
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| Photo By: Jerzy Bartkowski
(K:3768)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
4/1/2004 10:57:17 PM
Those eyes!!! 7 out of 7 for me.
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| Photo By: herwig b
(K:558)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
3/30/2004 11:16:38 PM
Maybe it's appealing to ya all because of the school girl/uniform... or what's left of it.
I think the crop is just right... even the carpet on the bottom of the picture.
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| Photo By: Twisted Rich
(K:691)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
3/28/2004 10:21:26 PM
This is a very beautiful composed picture. I think the reeds in the foreground has a lot to do with it, so it was a great idea to include them (and well done on keeping them sharp). The side lighting from the early morning sun also adds a lot of depth to the picture.
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| Photo By: Jeff Brokenshire
(K:123)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
3/28/2004 10:17:42 PM
Damn, but this is a beautiful scene. The foreground at the top and bottom, makes this a very unusual composition... for the better. The flowing effect of the water is also just right. Did you use a flash in order to expose the foreground so nicely, or was it natural light?
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| Photo By: Irving Freyre
(K:36)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
3/19/2004 3:17:04 AM
guess what i'm trying this weekend. Great shot and a great idea...
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| Photo By: Jon Alexander
(K:0)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
3/19/2004 3:12:39 AM
What a lovely landscape shot... the horizon is not that straight and now that i know that, it's a big put-off.
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| Photo By: Richard Dean
(K:737)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
3/16/2004 3:29:35 AM
I like this rather a lot. i tried something very similar... with a bird in the foreground, but i still need to get the spool developed. Congrats a great shot.
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| Photo By: Kaj Nielsen
(K:15279)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
2/16/2004 10:23:09 PM
Stunning composition. It's seems like one tough little fellow!
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| Photo By: Sam Norris
(K:6)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
2/12/2004 4:55:10 AM
I would've liked some more info on the picture. Her face is very sharp which i like a lot. The only destracting thing for me is the background (on the left of the picture).
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| Photo By: Islam Abdelsamie
(K:142)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
2/11/2004 10:32:00 PM
a very pleasing composition.
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| Photo By: Kenneth Kwan
(K:3084)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
2/11/2004 6:37:55 AM
Just love the composition of this portrait shot... The hair streaks also strengthen the image further.
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| Photo By: Ghada Noman
(K:3016)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
2/6/2004 2:37:16 AM
It?s a very unorthodox composition... but none the less it works very well in this photo. The side lighting on the beautiful girl works great and actually enhances the composition.
My 2 cents?
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| Photo By: Sebastian Duda zolo2
(K:41)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
2/5/2004 3:24:15 AM
No that i have read your title i think it is a great composition & picture. Before i read it i was not sure what the subject was and didn't think much of the picture. (But there must have been something that made me open the thumbnail...)
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| Photo By: Tom Ross
(K:6453)
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Critique By:
Pieter Visser (K:1582)
2/5/2004 2:10:00 AM
I love the colors in the clouds. Did you put the sun deliberately right smack in the middle? I think it would've work better if the sun was off center towards the left.
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| Photo By: Emanuele Calvagno
(K:14353)
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