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Kasia Koltunska
{K:5825} 11/14/2005
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This shot looks much better B&W and cropped. Excellent capture and expression. I agree with Naomi and Ronald about the void on the right. I thought at first that an even tighter crop might solve this - but then it just cuts off too much from the main subject (too little shoulder). But it is always an option.
Congrats,
Kasia
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Roland Lacson
{K:12214} 11/6/2005
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Hello Devesh, excellent environmental portrait, like the catchlight in the eyes. If I may suggest a little more contrast for punch & repositioning yourself so subject fills that void on right of frame as Naomi mentioned "Bright Spot". Otherwise a well composed shot, thank you so much for taking the time to view my portfolio & your kind comment, best wishes.
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DEVESH UBA
{K:1925} 10/20/2005
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Hi Naomi
Thanks for ur comment . Yep it is real hot down there . The place is almost desert with temperatures going as high as 50 degree centigrate .
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Naomi Weidner
{K:6636} 10/20/2005
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Nice portrait of a man in his environment. Initially I was a little distracted by the brightness over his right shoulder, but on consideration, I decided that it adds to the atmosphere, and helps create more of a sense of the environment (I'm assume that it is hot). -- Naomi
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DEVESH UBA
{K:1925} 10/20/2005
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Thanks for your comments Filippo
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Filippo Giorgio
{K:2158} 10/20/2005
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Very nice portrait...
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Mohsen Bayramnejad
{K:21377} 10/20/2005
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very nice portrait capture..really great in B&W!
7++
cheers,
Mohsen
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