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Neal Nye
{K:15827} 8/10/2005
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A nice summer day. I like the diagonal line those snags make as they lead our eye over the water to the building. Nice job.
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Brian Smistek
{K:1062} 8/9/2005
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Hi Michele,
Thanks for taking my words as being helpful. You're a super student! On the subject of teaching, I actually do teach photography to college interns and physicians. That, by no means indicates that I know enough to do anything more than offer suggestions. You're a pleasure to work with! B )
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Michele Carlsen
{K:146013} 8/9/2005
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Thank you Brian... You are becoming my teacher in many ways . I never heard of that rule either but now I understand why a picture I called 'wrathe' was said to be perfectly balenced . It was divided into thirds by accident.
Michele~
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Brian Smistek
{K:1062} 8/9/2005
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Hi Michele,
Looks like another hot spot for cool photos. Overall, I like the photo but a slight adjustment to the horizontal axis and a tighter drop would be of great benefit. Try using the rule of thirds to de-centralize the scene. In other words, tip the photo to the right so that the horizon is level and crop a good portion of the sky to lessen the negative space and create a nice rule of thirds image. All the best! Brian )
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