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Tobiah Deutsch
{K:2432} 7/26/2005
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Fernando,
This is lit up really nice. I like the angle too. I do think this needs a little rotation. Just a tad. It throws me off a bit, but those are really picky things. You're getting good. Just remember, you've lit it up nice, taken the time to get that just right... now make sure that you frame up the photo with just as much percision. All the lighting in the world won't help a badly framed photo. I think this is done well, but that rotation will help it out just that little extra bit. I must say that if I were you I'd shave it off just a tad on the right hand side of the image as well. That brown pipe doesn't need to be there right now and I find it a bit distracting.
I know I've given you tips on how to make this photo better again... but you're doing MUCH better than you were. Congrats!
Cheers,
Toby
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Hau Nguyen
{K:78} 7/26/2005
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A nice shot at right time!!
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taran
{K:1284} 7/25/2005
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NIce 1.
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François De Rosnay
{K:100} 7/25/2005
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Many sport photo today !
Well done
Remind me this one :
http://www.usefilm.com/image/866617.html
F
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Fernando Martins
{K:-527} 7/25/2005
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a BIT crooked. And I set....etc.
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Roberto Bertone
{K:13239} 7/25/2005
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Bellissima cattura, composizione e colore!!!
Compl. Fernando!!
Saluti.
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Fernando Martins
{K:-527} 7/25/2005
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I dont think so. This rail is a big crooked, indeed. But a set by the plataform front where he came from.
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Ron Wilson
{K:18362} 7/25/2005
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Nice lines. I really like the red rail. ??Is the canvas in need of a slight rotation clockwise??
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