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matthew morgan
{K:1539} 7/18/2005
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thank you for your advice ferdinand i am only just strting out in photography and can use all the help i can get
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FERDINAND DOTREMONT
{K:6612} 7/18/2005
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May I give you some advice? I should clear up the photo with PS and also eliminate the thin line on the face. I also find the composition too large, elimination of the left part as far as the arm of the girl and even a 1/2 cm of the right could the composition make better, at least what I think. (I hope you will not be angry, I only try to help)
Kind regards.
Ferdinand
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matthew morgan
{K:1539} 7/18/2005
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thanks for the tips liz clad you told me i rather know what i am doing wrong and fix rater then keep doing it
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Liz Wallis
{K:26133} 7/18/2005
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Matt, I'm not too sure on the composition, but that may be personal opinion. Also, the thin line running down her face ( could it be hair?) is a bit distracting...I would try cloning it out. All in all your model is very pretty,the idea was great, and I would ask her to go again :) Liz
PS I'm not picking on your work, I'm just trying to help.
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Karly Morgan
{K:535} 7/17/2005
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Sweet Matt I see you actually got one when she was still. Hehe
Cheers Karly
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