I hope I didn't give the impression that I didn't like this photo - I love the rich colors and the composition. As a marketing person, I have problems with off centered wording - and I agree with you; the photo would lose it's meaning to the title with the chair not being so clear on the right (since there are no words there). It's a great shot and I bet it was a great time.
Thanks for your critique, Cheryl. Actually, I have cropped the left edge to hide away the reflection of the car parked outside. When cropping, I thought I would not lose anything important on the left by ignoring the wording, and I can get the set of up-side-down furniture to the center... Anyway, I admit the weakness & the off-balance of the wording, and appreciate your words. Best Regards,
TN
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Cheryl Ogle{K:24494} 11/16/2004
Great photo - wonderful color and idea. My only critique is that you crop it in from the right to square up the wording and center it. It looks a little off when it's on the left that way. I really like the narrative too.