I see you had 60 views on this one and no one has commented. So, I'll break the silence.
This image has a lot going for it. I think the concept, colors and textures are good, but where it falls down is there are just too many different things protruding from the main art. Simple is usually better, (I think) with this type of work.
Just my opinion and how I see it, and of course everyone is different!
You have some interesting work in your portfolio. Lori ;)