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Ferran Rial
{K:6670} 6/6/2006
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Wonderful shot!! Excellent!
ferran
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rico Anggorodiputro
{K:66} 3/2/2005
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good composition, exellent
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Cinzia AzeAze
{K:-266} 11/28/2004
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non scatti piu'?
bella foto
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Peter De Rycke
{K:41212} 9/1/2004
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Wow, excellent work, specially in b&w ! very good contrast and depth in the picture ! Regards, Peter
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JT Koffenberger
{K:686} 9/1/2004
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since this thread seems to be on composition, I'll wave in on the side of filling the frame more with the umbrellas. To me, they are the interest here and I find the space the sky occupies to be distracting. But, that's just me.
Another thought would be to lower the camera to allow the first umbrella to fill the entire right side of the image. Then you also have a nice interplay between the umbrellas and the mountains in the distance, all while removing the plain sky.
Those comments aside, this is a great capture showing a great eye!
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Lori Stitt
{K:75282} 9/1/2004
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I like the composition you chose. Very nice image, striking tones and lines,
LOVE IT,
Lori :)
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Paolo De Maio
{K:34932} 9/1/2004
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Al di lā della regola dei terzi suggerita in modo appropriato ritengo che a volte esistano le eccezioni che confermano la regola: la Tua č un' esempio lampante!!!!
Il taglio quadrato dā ordine all'immagine ma la schiaccia, la tua composizione, invece, conferisce profonditā e conduce "lontano", con delicatezza, l'occhio dell'osservatore.
era questo (secondo me) che volevi ottenere e ci sei riuscito !!!
Complimenti sinceri Andrea
Paolo
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Krystian Frahn
{K:805} 8/31/2004
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I like the image as it is, without cropping suggested by other member. I like this free space above the umbrellas. The only thing I would do is to crop the bottom of the image, so that umbrellas and sand is occupies 1/3 of the image. But it's hard to do this without modifying proportions of the image too much. Regards Krystian
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Krystian Frahn
{K:805} 8/31/2004
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I like the image as it is, without cropping suggested by other member. I like this free space above the umbrellas. The only thing I would do is to crop the bottom of the image, so that umbrellas and sand is occupies 1/3 of the image. But it's hard to do this without modifying proportions of the image too much.
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Roberto Arcari Farinetti
{K:209486} 8/31/2004
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ciao
stupenda prospettiva ed eccezioanle chiaro/scuro, bello anche il premio della mainpage piu' che meritata!
roby
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Shahriar Broumand
{K:692} 8/29/2004
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Wonderful picture Andrea. Well done!
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Rabat Tabar
{K:3948} 8/28/2004
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bella composizione, da un grande senso prospettico.
bello scatto
complimenti
rabat
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Patrick Jacobson
{K:29151} 8/28/2004
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Lovely! =) Very nice motive and tones.
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{K:1343} 8/26/2004
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Bella immagine e prospettiva - Gradevoli tonalitā e contrasto in B/N.
Un saluto ;) Pier Luigi
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ventrix drogo
{K:65398} 8/26/2004
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Interessante immagine. Bella prospettiva. Ciao.
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Tony Diana
{K:13396} 8/25/2004
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Estupendo juego de ritmo y contraste, saludos
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G G
{K:61359} 8/25/2004
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Nice composition and beautiful perspective. Congrats. Fabrice
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Lukasz Kuczkowski
{K:14687} 8/25/2004
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lovely shot;
I prefer square shot but anyway b&w works here very well
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Gosia Barta
{K:824} 8/25/2004
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superb but truth, better in the square  )
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Aira Manna
{K:11187} 8/25/2004
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bravo, bravo davvero...
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andrea erreenne
{K:36} 8/25/2004
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you've made a good job Michael, thank you for your suggestions.
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Michael Kanemoto
{K:22115} 8/25/2004
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Me again, "see the rule of thirds" lines.
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Michael Kanemoto
{K:22115} 8/25/2004
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Excellent use of backlighting to bring out the shape of the umbrellas. I think this would work best in black and white, where the shape of the umbrellas becomes a study of geometric repetition through perspective against the light background.
Only improvement suggestion is to use the rule of thirds and show a little less sky.
I have attached a crop to give you an idea, and I also darkened the sky per another comment just to see if it added any drama.
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velociraptor
{K:692} 8/25/2004
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Bella geometria nella regolaritā degli ombrelloni e nella serpentina del mare sulla spiaggia.
Davvero carina!
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Andrea Forti
{K:3069} 8/25/2004
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Fantastica poetica affascinante prospettiva, veramente incantevole... silhouette azzeccate, molto romantiche...
ciao
AF
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Lucy Bernadette
{K:5806} 8/25/2004
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nice composition.
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andrea erreenne
{K:36} 8/25/2004
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Yes, I tried but I don't like it ;)
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Bart Aldrich
{K:7614} 8/25/2004
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Terrific use of lines and silhouettes. Have you considered cropping it to a square and darkening the sky to add drama? Regards
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