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Chad Parish
{K:6440} 6/20/2004
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Great idea at work here Alan! Though I too would crop the top windows to remove the greenery at the top right and keep it as simplistic to the eye as possible. I have attached a possible crop, let me know your thoughts.
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David McClenaghan
{K:9481} 5/6/2004
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This shot is more about the environment than just the lady with the stroller, shes an added bonus.
All looks fine to me.
Love the pipe dead smack centre of the frame.
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Stephen Bowden
{K:64141} 5/6/2004
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Excellent Alan - great capture. I must admit I didn't notice the drainpipe ... then again it is nearly 0200am on a night shift lol
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Carlheinz Bayer
{K:14220} 5/5/2004
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Hey Alan! For sure the subject have/had potential. I like the impression of the lady with the stroller. That finally makes the picture here. To "place" her in front of that abstract like background is great.
Now comes the but. Even when I like to work with more than one subject I would tend to focus on the lady here. Means I would suggest to crop from the top; IMHO to the first floor.
The picture is almost two dimensional (and I love that kind of pictures BTW). That's why you need a clear almost abstract composition. I agree on the water pipe; would be a good element, but it should be separate from the lady. The lady is to centered. You would gain a lot of tension if the lady would be "placed" on the right.
The distortion. Is easy to fix with PS or could be pushed to a more extreme and you would gain a totally different effect.
I hope this wasn't to negative and didn't offend you.
Take care! Carlheinz
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Jani Salvataggio
{K:27283} 5/5/2004
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nice shot!!!
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Dhimant Vyas
{K:2509} 5/5/2004
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nice composition!
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Subhash Sen
{K:11931} 5/5/2004
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Hi Alan dont mind but i dont like the water pipe at the back,cheers,Subhash.
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