Thanks a lot for all your comments. Yes Matej, I used fill flash, with -1 stop of flash exposure compensation. To David: yes, you are right about the white thingy under her arm, and the contrast definately improves the picture.
A very nice shot. Only two things IMO could improve on is a little more contrast, and eliminating what looks like a tear under her left arm pit. If you're not using fill flash, it would bring her eyes out greatly. Just my opinion. Still very good stuff. Best regards David
Way to go, Bjorn! Nice pose, good framing, and she looks like she was having fun! Did you use fill flash here? (just guessing by the catchlights) Perhaps you could nudge up the contrast a tiny bit for more 'shine'.
Congrats with your outdoor photo shoot! From the 3 "ELS 1" photographs I like this the most! The background is not taking attention. Also the point were her legs are cut is natural. It don't get you start looking for the missing pieces. Well done! I just miss the stunning colors I saw in some other portfolios. That?s the only negative I can find.
But, don't take my comments to serious. I do not have any experience with models, but I assume it is not easy to get the same stunning result like some others fashion photographers.