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Chuck Freeman
{K:13616} 2/27/2004
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If you can produce a model of your own design you will be on the right path. Oddly enough, a lot of fashion shots are not well done. This is an example of very bad. If you want to see true fashion go back to the days of Steichen,Penn and many others. Good luck.
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Brian T. Ach
{K:1742} 9/30/2003
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The hair in the face would not make a cover (I am in publishing) and the lighting is flat. Sharpness is questionable. good luck!
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dwight Marshall
{K:326} 9/30/2003
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Not so sure.. dont dig the twist.. everything twists.. skin, clothes, etc.. with super retouching it would be ok...
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Lissa Hatcher
{K:3006} 9/30/2003
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ok here we go ... I agree about the neck , I also find the lack of sharpness to be a problem (the hand very much so ) also I would take out the pink splotch on her uper arm ...if it was a magazine this would be taken out . wonder if a bar code would make for a good laugh ? As far a type goes its ok it is a bit small on my screen but I know in print it is most likely ok ... one question though do mini skirts go low ?
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Verna Absolutestockphoto
{K:2836} 9/30/2003
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Nice..........If it was my work.....I would get rid of the necklace and rings and bracelet unless I am paid to advertize them... have the hair over her left ear.......imperfect feature.........neck bone is too stressed.......looks like a thick football players neck..........do you have a choice of models? I would think that the photo would need to be dead tack sharp.........it seems a bit soft....GOOD LUCK :-)
P.s...........her arms should be off the body.....pressed down makes the arm look too thick near the shoulder. Hope this helps and doesn't discourage.
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