i see people telling you how to "correct" your pictures, but i think you may be doing something different from what they are telling you to do. i like the hard light and the hard color. these color ones are much more interesting than the black and white ones. the women have more aggressive expressions and the pictures have more life and energy. it would be nice if you would respond even a little. you can use babelfish.altavista.com to translate roughly from spanish to english, then paste in the translation.
intresting shot, although the colours are a little off, a bit to much magenta. and you can see the dust marks maybe from the scan?. very nice compostion though, i like the fact that you make her whole body the length of the pict, brings you eye right thru it all. regards -ryan
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{K:209486} 8/31/2003