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MaryBell
{K:32791} 7/7/2003
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Hermen,
This is interesting and has a strange incomprhensible feel to it. I agree with Masahiko's suggestion and your resulting crop.
It almost feels as if those rusted items were pews and this scene was simply waiting to be filled by a congregation for some bizarre ritual.
Mary
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Hermen Pen
{K:9168} 7/4/2003
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When I made the shot, I thought the blue vertical would make a good balance against the green tank.
(By the way, it's a window pane in fact - the window is gone.)
But after your suggestions I made also the crop without the blue part and I think you are right - it is better without the blue vertical.
I could have seen it earlier, but I did not even try this crop...
Sometimes it is difficult to free yourself from too fixed ideas :)
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Harlan Heald
{K:15732} 7/4/2003
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Beautiful abstract with nice panels of rust. Good eye! Good work!!! (The white curtain on the left is a bit distracting, but I like it as is, too.)
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Masahiko Shibata
{K:14107} 7/3/2003
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Hi! Hermen! Why didn't you crop the left white curtain? It bothers very much!Without this,you might think no deapth here though, abstracts need no explanation about what or where this photo taken.
Plain surface is much better here and we can enjoy in wonderful colors of this nice work!!
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Gregory McLemore
{K:35129} 7/3/2003
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Herman a lovely subtle capture, the soft tones and clarity works well here,and the title is most appropriate bravo.
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