alan, i studied this image, and told to myself as how this image can be improved. I thought well, her pose looks odd, not her facial expression, her body positioning. Then i realized she is on uneven rough rocks, that's hard enough to sit upon, and she has given a beautiful sultry expression. Her facial expression, goes very well with her bikini of choice. I am giving you a 7/7 for your effort. I think you could get extra mileage, if she were to have lifted her right hand leaned back a little and put her right hand behind her head, so that her bikini and her beautiful body would have been more visible..