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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 8/7/2008
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Thank you very much for the nice comment, Dave!
Well, the colors/light were enhanced by the gradient filter (train window) ;-). The trees are OK as composition elements, but they are too close to the edge of the photo. They needed a bit more space, I guess, as the cloned image (after Andre's idea) seems to show.
Cheers!
Nick
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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 8/6/2008
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Thanks a lot for the nice and detailed comment, Andre! You led my mind to the right direction, while I was thinking of cropping rather, which in this case wouldn't really bring so much since even cropping off the leftmost tree would still result into the next tree waiting exactly as near the left edge.
So, in order to get an idea of what this would look like if there was some more landscape at the left, let's clone the leftmost tree and generate some more landscape. (Attachment.) And yes, it works much better this way. The conclusion for the "backward engineering" is then that a small turn of the camera to the left would help much.
Thanks a lot for the idea!
Nick
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Cloned leftmost tree after Andre's idea |
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Nick Karagiaouroglou
{K:127263} 8/6/2008
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Thank you very much, Yazeed!
Cheers!
Nick
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Dave Stacey
{K:150877} 8/6/2008
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A very nice series with beautiful colours contrasting with the coldness of the winter, Nick! I think the trees are an integral part of the composit
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Andre Denis
{K:66407} 8/5/2008
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Hi Nick,
To answer your question about cropping away the end tree, I think you already answered it with your next image. (A Life In Silence) In this one, when the trees come close to the border of the image, it seems like there is no space to "breathe". If there was some more empty landscape on the left side of the trees, the image would be more pleasing to the eye. In your image A Life In Silence, you achieve that perfectly.
Andre
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M jalili
{K:69009} 8/5/2008
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Beautiful my friend . Regards .......
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