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parehan .K
{K:27453} 4/14/2008
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You have a wonderful spirit dear Erdem.! Keep the beauty coming. Warm regards and hugs.
parehan
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Erdem Kutukoglu
{K:315} 4/14/2008
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I'll do my best. :-) Thanks again. EK
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Sounak Mukhopadhyay
{K:2854} 4/14/2008
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You are most welcome, Erdem. Keep up the good work and help me out with your suggestions as I'm very new to photography and wager to learn.
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Erdem Kutukoglu
{K:315} 4/14/2008
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Pefect. Thank you very much Dear Sounak. :-)
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Sounak Mukhopadhyay
{K:2854} 4/14/2008
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What about SHINE as the title as it's mainly about the amazing shining eyes? I personally like one word titles.
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Erdem Kutukoglu
{K:315} 4/14/2008
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Thank you very much Sounak.
That's true, it was a spontaneous shot. I agree with you re the door on the left-hand side, apparently I forgot to crop it. :-)
Any suggestion for the title? Frankly, I would very much appreciate your contribution. :-)
Best regards,
EK
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Sounak Mukhopadhyay
{K:2854} 4/14/2008
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Brilliant take. I believe it is a spontaneous natural shot. I'd prefer the shine on the left side (the door may be) a bit distracting.
Think of the title again please. It's too prosaic.
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Erdem Kutukoglu
{K:315} 4/14/2008
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Parehan, thank you so much for your beautiful contribution.
Well, it won't be a match to Yeats's poetry, but those sentences filled with sensitiveness made me think of Alan Parsons' lyrics, Old and Wise (I wish the original music could accompany you while reading, but helas!):
As far as my eyes can see
There are Shadows approaching me
And to those I left behind
I wanted you to Know
You've always shared my deepest thoughts
You follow where I go
And oh when I'm old and wise
Bitter words mean little to me
Autumn Winds will blow right through me
And someday in the mist of time
When they asked me if I knew you
I'd smile and say you were a friend of mine
And the sadness would be Lifted from my eyes
Oh when I'm old and wise
As far as my Eyes can see
There are shadows surrounding me
And to those I leave behind
I want you all to know
You've always Shared my darkest hours
I'll miss you when I go
And oh, when I'm old and wise
Heavy words that tossed and blew me
Like Autumn winds that will blow right through me
And someday in the mist of time
When they ask you if you knew me
Remember that You were a frined of mine
As the final curtain falls before my eyes
Oh when I'm Old and wise
As far as my eyes can see ...
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Erdem Kutukoglu
{K:315} 4/14/2008
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Thank you Arthur.
Did you notice the toothpick as well? :-)
All the best,
EK
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parehan .K
{K:27453} 4/14/2008
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WHEN you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;
How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim Soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face;
And bending down beside the glowing bars,
Murmur, a little sadly, how Love fled
And paced upon the mountains overhead
And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.
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Astonishing capture!!! love it.. Warm regards, parehan
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Arthur Kornienko
{K:9686} 4/14/2008
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Real nice Erdem, the colours and lighting are excellent as is the expression on the subjects face.
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Erdem Kutukoglu
{K:315} 4/14/2008
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:-) I don't know how I'll look at her age, but I know something for sure: I love blue too ! ;-))
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Jen van Wijn
{K:24075} 4/14/2008
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For sure she has style, I love her attitude, her desire for life!! What about your style:))xxJenxx
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Erdem Kutukoglu
{K:315} 4/14/2008
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Thank you Dear Jen.
She has a style, hasn't she?
xxek
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Jen van Wijn
{K:24075} 4/14/2008
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There is a lot of emotion, character and pride in this
beautiful lady there dearest Erdem! She even knows blue
fitts very well on her;)) Very delicate portait, txs!!
Big hug and enjoy your day, xxJen
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