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Kehaulani Pires
{K:867} 10/29/2007
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great idea, right on pulling
her away from rock, and would
have looked more delicate in a
strong way with out the sheet.
or maybe is she was aggressively up against the rock
with sheet pressed against her body, with same look. still wouldn't expose her if she was uncomfortable. but it would give the lines of her lady hood. just an idea!
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Shirley D. Cross-Taylor
{K:174049} 10/18/2007
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You're welcome, Terry!:)
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Terry Taylor
{K:1503} 10/17/2007
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Thank you Salman.
Cheers,
Terry
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abolfazl salmanzadeh
{K:401} 10/17/2007
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Beautiful...:)
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Terry Taylor
{K:1503} 10/16/2007
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Shirley,
Thank you for the thoughtful critique. Robert also pointed out the covering of the breasts. I agree it does convey some awkwardness.
Thanks again for taking the time to look at my image(s)!
Cheers,
Terry
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Shirley D. Cross-Taylor
{K:174049} 10/13/2007
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I love her face, Terry, but feel that her breast should either be covered, or that the white cloth be completely removed...making this a nude photo. It looks strange with the cloth as it is because it looks as if her breast were accidentally exposed.
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Terry Taylor
{K:1503} 10/9/2007
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Thank you for the critique Robert.
Great pointer on the pose and yeah, she was kinda cramped in that spot. Trying to make best use of open shadow for that time of day. See pic below.
Thanks again.
Cheers,
Terry
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Robert Staeck
{K:919} 10/9/2007
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I love the warm tone of the rocks complimenting her beautiful skin tones, the soft and glowing light is wonderful, the idea of nude/skin and the the texture/natural feel of the rocks is engaging.
The white cloth and the hand holding it disrupts the potentially graceful flow of her body and the overall natural warm tones of the image, if she did not want to expose her breast she could have pulled her knees close to her chest and still used her arm to cover the side by wraping her arms around her raised knees. And maybe if she were moved just slightly away from the rocks so it does not look like she is cramped for space.
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