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Chris Brown
{K:1000} 4/19/2007
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Hi John, Thanks for your opinion - I guess I hadn't even really seen the power lines... I might have a play tonight. Thanks - Chris
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John Pitman
{K:8473} 4/19/2007
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Nice lighting throught the middle and interesting detail. Viewed large, I agree that the white building should go. I would also be tempted to remove the power lines. Well taken.
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Chris Brown
{K:1000} 4/18/2007
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Oh yes - duh! Thanks - Chris
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:101119} 4/18/2007
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CC = Critiquer's Corner
Inviting a more "detailed" critique.
:)
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Chris Brown
{K:1000} 4/18/2007
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Thanks Doyle, though please can you clarify what CC means - sorry all a bit new to this!!! Thanks....
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:101119} 4/18/2007
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Awesome work Chris. Couldn't possibly be appreciated by non-donors who cannot see it at full size.
A couple of pointers I noticed . . . since this IS a CC image will follow but I want to emphasize that this is one VERY good bit o' work! MOST impressive.
I noticed the group of buildings in the bright light (Left-third, central area) which seem VERY . . . distractingly bright. At 400%, I can see that they have some detail to them too . . . so I would think a little selective burning might pay off well there.
I also noticed a very thin, uniform halo along the sky / moutain ridge . . . At this scale it would be too minor to deal with but I have no idea how big the actual image is and if you're planning on having a large print made you might want to look at it.
Lastly . . . you're right . . . lose the lower right white barn.
Top Notch work Chris. Congratulations!
Regards,
Doyle I <~~~~~
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Chris Brown
{K:1000} 4/18/2007
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Thanks Joe - Yes you do have to view it large, it looks a bit like a blur otherwise!!! Thanks for the comments though...
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Joe Brown
{K:23213} 4/18/2007
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Fantastic landscape, the large panoramic view is great, without it I don't think I would fully appreciate this image. Dramatic sky and very nice light on the landscape. There is a lot to see in this image. Well captured,
Best regards,
Joe
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Chris Brown
{K:1000} 4/18/2007
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Thanks Metoni - You have a great portfolio, tried to see your website but it didn't work I am afraid. I was interessted in your design work... (I am a designer too) - Chris
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metoni .
{K:24727} 4/18/2007
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Amazing landscape.
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Chris Brown
{K:1000} 4/18/2007
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The one thing I would say is that I wished I had cloned out the white barn in the bottom right, I find it a little distracting. What do you think?
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