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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/22/2006
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Thanks Debarshi for leaving your comments. Yea, i'll chk it out.
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Debarshi Duttagupta
{K:26815} 6/21/2006
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How did I miss this. Superb macro. Excellent colours. You can see the full cloud series in my website www.ushwaia.in
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/7/2006
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Thanks again.Its one of our national colours. regs, Jen
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Riny Koopman
{K:102911} 6/6/2006
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This ORANGE colour is oure national symbol.Great details in here. Riny
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/5/2006
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Thanks Nil for commenting..yep i got the mesg & understood it from UF pals & Doyle has given a lot more pointers explaining me the 1/3rd rule. im happy for the help & concern. regs, JEN
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Nilanjan Mitra
{K:12955} 6/5/2006
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This is wonderful Jen.. excellent color.. :) very well done.. "Black border" would have made it perfect. regards, nil
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/5/2006
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Thanks Narabia for your lovely comment. 'SUNNY SUN'
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/5/2006
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Thanks a lot Doyle, it really gives an impact now & black framing is apt.Looks graceful this way too.1/3rd. im grateful to u to teach me & jot down simplifying the rules.its here at UF, ive learnt. you helped me understand the basic rules in photography..never had i tried this thing. i'll for sure keep this in mind & make use of the 1/3rd rule.. Thanks again for your support. Regards, Jennifer
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:101119} 6/3/2006
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Hi Jennifer! Good that you pulled it off center (on one axis) but I had in mind pulling it from BOTH axis, horizontal and vertical. It's called the rule of 1/3s and if you picture a tic-tac-toe board, anywhere lines cross is a good place to make a focal point in a composition. It works very well to keep pictures dynamic by adding tension instead of static. I attached an example so that you'd know what I had in mind. You can see the difference between orange and black borders yourself . . . that's subjective but I would point out that it's (as you say) more common . . . for a reason. You could still accent it with a thin color. Rich colors and vibrant colors are much better presented with the black (IMO) while muted could use white . . . Check the example, determine what YOU like and enjoy doing your thing . . . As I said initially, your work is good already. I only point out ways in my opinion that could give the good shots like this even more impact. I hope it helps! :)
Regards, Doyle I <~~~~~
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narabia
{K:9563} 6/3/2006
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really majestic sun :)
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/3/2006
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Thanks Arijit for your lovely comment. Nice to hear from u.gr8 you liked it.
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arijit(ratul) talukder
{K:6029} 6/3/2006
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wow jennifer an absolute stunning shot ! beautiful macro , lovely details , colour . great capture. arijit.
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/3/2006
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Thanks Susan for such kind words.NICE imagination. regs, Jen
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/3/2006
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Thanks Mel
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/3/2006
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Thanks a lot for ur appreciation.
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/3/2006
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Thanks Jose for rating it..im contented :) Wishes, Jennifer
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/3/2006
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Thanks Klaas, I'm learning a lot from u too.im happy with the critical pointers.Pls keep doing it. Regs, Jennifer
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/3/2006
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Thanks AVI, i appreciate ur suggestion..chk the pic attached. regs, Jen
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/3/2006
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Hi Doyle, Thanks a lot for penning your opinions & beautiful critical comments.Im happy to know & wish to learn a lot of new stuff in photography & for sure with pointers & suggestions like these will help enhance my work.
I'll keep in mind & try capturing some off-centered shots next with florals. I felt the black background is common.No doubt, its striking & my favourite colour too..so ive attached the same..have a look..at the difference.
Please feel free to critically analyse my images.
Regards, Jennifer
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/3/2006
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Hi Doyle, Thanks a lot for penning your opinions & beautiful critical comments.Im happy to know & wish to learn a lot of new stuff in photography & for sure with pointers & suggestions like these will help enhance my work.
I'll keep in mind & try capturing some off-centered shots next with florals. I felt the black background is common.No doubt, its striking & my favourite colour too..so ive attached the same..have a look..at the difference.
Please feel free to critically analyse my images.
Regards, Jennifer
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z z
{K:7231} 6/2/2006
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Excellent detais!
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selami Torun
{K:9397} 6/2/2006
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Beautiful work Jennifer !!!! congrats
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Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
{K:96391} 6/2/2006
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great details. stunning tones. outstanding. 7
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Klaas Baas
{K:15111} 6/2/2006
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God shot Jennifer, but I think Doyle has a point there with the framing. I too think that a black frame let the flower pop out of it, and makes the whole photo stronger, but as Doyle said, IMO. Good details in this one. Take care,
Klaas
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Avi
{K:70138} 6/2/2006
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Good shot Jen. Only suggestion is that a black/dark brown frame would have brought out the contrast better.
Brilliant colors though !! I LOVE colors !! :)
Avi
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:101119} 6/2/2006
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A wonderful shot Jennifer . . . with good details and rich, well saturated colors. A couple of points (in my opinion) which you may wish to consider: .....First, while florals can work centered, on ocassion, I would recommend (and prefer) an off-center composition. It just seems more dynamic MOST of the time! .....Second, I would frame with black and not orange . . . something which would really make the subject pop out at the viewer! .....Third, keep in mind that these pointers are my opinion . . . they are something I think would give this VERY good shot even more impact. But have no doubt, this is a VERY good capture! Congratulations.
Regards, Doyle I <~~~~~
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Susan Hernandez
{K:6487} 6/2/2006
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Just beautiful, its like sunshine coming through my screen, excellent shot!
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/2/2006
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Hi Deb, Thanks for the comment & suggestion. yep, can think about 1/3rd. Orange is a flashy colour..& eye catchy too..iven't done anything with it.
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D e b
{K:9399} 6/2/2006
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Hey Jen..!! This is good..!! Colors are good too..!! good detailing..!! Just a thought or two..
1. You could have put the center of the petals in abiding by the 1/3rd rule..!!
2. brightness could have been reduced a bit so as to make it more eye catching...!!
All in all good shot..!!!
Rgds, Deb
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/2/2006
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Thanks a lot, Jake. I appreciate your lovely comments. Regards, Jennifer
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Jacob French
{K:6315} 6/2/2006
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What a beautiful capture! Those colors are simply stunning. Good composition, too. Centered is sometimes best!
Well done! Jake
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Jennifer S
{K:2363} 6/2/2006
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Thanks Nessa, appreciate your instant comment.
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vanessa shakesheff
{K:68840} 6/2/2006
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Beautiful detail a stunnung orange..nessa
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