This photograph does not do much for me. Technically, it needs either sharpening or softening. Now it is caught in between. The digitizing caused softness is there without contributing to the image.
Compositionally, It is weak for my taste. It looks like, well, a head on shot. The tight cropping does not seem to have much purpose and the tones, although probably technically correct, lack impact.
I do not rate photos, so I am offering only my frank comments.
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