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T-zone Palermo
{K:2124} 12/14/2004
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Great use of lighting...
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Femke de Wit
{K:6020} 12/13/2004
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Very nice picture, good atmosphere. Femke
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Elsje Fiederelsje
{K:6320} 12/13/2004
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GREAT!!!
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Benigno Bobby
{K:-1679} 12/13/2004
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konsep dan idenya kreatif
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sindhu rajaram
{K:724} 12/13/2004
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beautiful!
great feel...carries a lot of emotion
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laura diaz
{K:863} 12/13/2004
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Excellent!
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Dorothy Di Liddo
{K:13787} 12/13/2004
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great shot, lots of emotion. Dottie
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Dino F
{K:627} 12/13/2004
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Thanks for your critics Justin. Very deep and worthfull...I like that. I think I have to learn from you many....I already saw your work...they're great.!! I would like to add you as my friend...ok..;)
Thanks
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Lester Tradelbloom
{K:3291} 12/13/2004
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This is a wonderful idea, I really like your concept here, the design is wonderful, but there are a few things which I don't like - 1) your camers angle; you have an image here where paralell lines and shapes are everywhere, so you have to work with that. The window is not straight, and I thing it would look far better if it was (or positioned off-balance intentionally) but here, because it is so bright, it is the first thing we see and it damages your concept. and 2) Your Framing; it is well done, but the coloured text in the bottom left corner drags it down - from a distance, it looks as if you =have just framed it badly and you have leaking colour. Keep copyright notices, etc very subtle - if you need them at all. The frame is part of the image now, just like the girl is; you wouldn't write your name on her face before photographing her, so is there really a need to do it here?
I love the idea, but I don't think you have done your best here.
- Justin
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