I like this photo! A group taking sun bath. The choise for a monochromatic image works too well here, I think. Good contrast and people disposition in the frame, it?s more important, since they are the principal ideia. The little girl is fairly positionated, looking to the camera? She is the center of this photo! In my opinion the sky crop just over the hill is not the better composition. But this not depreciate your work. Is it a snap shot? Well, congratulation for a very nice dramatic portrait.