Thats an interesting picture, but i think its a little flat, why dont you try, changing the angle of the composition, letting the cigarrets and the ash tray in the horizon, whith a back dark, to stand out the smoke. And if you are going to realize the composition in color, why dont you tell somebody to smoke the lit cigarret right in the moment you?re going to take the picture, for to get a red light in the border of the cigarret. By the way, i use to smoke winston?s. Excuse my english, Regards!!
nice compo.. i think it would work better as a b&w, so the color is ok... the DOF could be a little better, the forgound is out and the background could be a little more in focus
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{K:10665} 4/28/2004