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zosia zija
{K:11106} 8/3/2003
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good!
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MaryBell
{K:32791} 7/7/2003
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I don't mind the stack but I do mind the lights - I don't suppose you carry a screw driver with you - just take those suckers down. ;)
I would suggest cropping more from the left to remove those dark stair step shadows or objects on the edge of the frame.
I agree with Andy's assessment of the opposed diagonals...
satisfying photograph...
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Claude H.
{K:1560} 6/23/2003
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Great composition. I like the mix of lines and texture. I also like the tone. Regards, Claude
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Andy Eulass
{K:13435} 6/16/2003
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Oh, this I like a whole lot. The opposed diagonals created by the buildings really give this a dynamic quality. The tones are great as well. Very nice detail throughout. The tones and the feel are great because they remind me of some your Holga images, which you know I adore. Great work.
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Bryce Hughes
{K:2957} 6/15/2003
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nice alissa, Michaelle's already said it about the lines, tones and composition, I think you did quite well with this :)
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Alisa Mudge
{K:12511} 2/13/2004
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Thanks Tomasz.
Mickey -
What rocks is your detailed critique woman! Thanks for taking the time to bust out a whole paragraph.
That chimney thingy was buggin me as well. I tryed dodging it but with no luck. Not even I am tall enough to get another angle, but there was a ton of junk to climb on .... I should go back there today.
Alisa
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michaelle .
{K:3807} 6/14/2003
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Alisa...
Wonderful textures, lines and tones in this image! The layering is perfect with how the edges of the roof tops come together centerframe (but I'm sure you already knew that :) )My one nit would be the chimney thingy on the front roof - while it blends in pretty well, it does break up the lines a little and I'm dying to see the window behind it (hope that makes sense)... Very well seen and executed - you rock!
mickey
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Tomasz Mazur
{K:595} 6/14/2003
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super !!!
very good shot!!!
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