Great Work Dear Mohammad, I like the Focus, still some color imbalances harm your Work, if you edit your work in Photoshop, sometime turn it into CMYK mode, it will show you something amazing! Your white balance is poor so, the exposure is not a good one. I know, you're still trying to work with your new camera, but, don't leave everything in Auto mode, at least about White Balance don't. this image should have been taken in Daylight setting, which is a little Warmer than Auto, which will help you through over exposure of your works... If you see your RGB Histogram (for example with Google's Picasa 2), you will find that the Red (and maybe green) channel is saturated, that's why the image looks eye disturbing. I wish it will be Helpful (not hurtful) for you, Keep on your good works, My best Wishes, Mohammad