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baYu6wqlPP vH612wLkPsS (K:2519)
11/20/2004 2:27:15 PM
Good one, ed. The placement of the figures is excellent, works as an abstract, simple composition.
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Critique By:
Milton Louizidis (K:1406)
11/20/2004 11:40:05 AM
nice nice very good bravo love it
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Critique By:
Nathan W. Lediard (K:-53)
11/20/2004 11:30:10 AM
A good idea this., maybe it could be improved with some tweaking of the contrast with curves in PS.
Regards, Nathan.
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Critique By:
Blaine MacDonald (K:610)
11/19/2004 4:31:32 PM
nice picture ....nice feeling with it
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baYu6wqlPP vH612wLkPsS (K:2519)
11/18/2004 4:49:46 PM
Hi, ed, this is quite amazing. I prefer the original version, the overall softness of tone seems to complement the building shape.
I'm interested in what you say about your 'muses'; I'm a great haunter of the art galleries in Edinburgh, both permanent collections and special exhibitions, which inspires me to make images, though not necessarily particular shots or styles. I enjoyed the Ed Ruscha and Jasper Johns shows recently, do you know their work?
To some extent, my starting to look for detail in real things, that might be (mis)interpreted as abstract art, is inspired guys like them.
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Olga Vareli (K:22477)
11/18/2004 11:24:56 AM
oh, how I wish I was there!!!!A toy museum near the sea...absolutely wonderful.
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Critique By:
ed lawson (K:896)
11/17/2004 11:13:41 PM
Hi Peter. Thanks so much for your feedback, which was great to have. I actually fiddled with the levels for a while, and settled for one which made the building melt into the sky deliberately. Looking back, your levels bring out the sky which make it more interesting, so you are right really. Thanks and best
Ed
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ed lawson (K:896)
11/17/2004 11:06:59 PM
Thanks for these comments. Just for those who doubt that 20 could come at once...this was the 50th anniversary of this type of bus - they perfectly lined up (with chalk marks on the road) lots of old buses. It was an easy shot! Here's another, less interesting version. Ta. Ed
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Critique By:
Tara Gullett (K:1678)
11/17/2004 9:10:30 PM
Wow.. Love this one too. Were they truly lined up like this or did you add some? Very nice capture. Tara : )
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Critique By:
ppdix (K:17069)
11/16/2004 10:28:58 PM
Amazing composition. I agree with the level correction too.
Cheers
Pat
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Peter De Rycke (K:41212)
11/15/2004 10:15:58 PM
Very good composition ! The clouds really match the structure .. adding more level correction would make these textures come foreward more pronounced. I add a little try of myself !
Peter
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Peter De Rycke (K:41212)
11/15/2004 9:48:50 PM
Splendid composition !
Peter
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Critique By:
Iain Macadie (K:1092)
11/15/2004 9:47:53 PM
Great abstact, nice balance with the two curves.
Regards, Iain
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Critique By:
Deb Mayes (K:19605)
11/11/2004 3:19:46 PM
Now there's a different point of view. Creative, well executed, and great title.
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Critique By:
ed lawson (K:896)
11/10/2004 1:21:05 AM
Hey Omaar. Why do people always see more than I do in these photos? Different headlights, a missing plum. I don't know. Keep up your excellent work. Get some sleep too! Best Ed
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Critique By:
Omar Rifaat (K:10141)
11/10/2004 1:17:27 AM
You are a master of this style!
Did you eat that one missing plum?
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Critique By:
Omar Rifaat (K:10141)
11/10/2004 1:15:50 AM
A nice informal portrait. Great play of light and shadow! The friendship really is well captured!
omar
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Critique By:
Beka C.o. (K:650)
11/9/2004 1:41:56 PM
wow, nice!
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Critique By:
Kevin Collier (K:19076)
11/8/2004 11:35:37 PM
great ps work -- love the minimal color,diagonal composition and the fact that the only grren bus visible has different headlights - - K
By the way - what's an anorak?? 
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Critique By:
Omar Rifaat (K:10141)
11/8/2004 11:21:15 PM
Brilliant shot, ed! Are these real buses or miniature replicas? They look too clean to be real!
Omar
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Critique By:
Stephen Bowden (K:64141)
11/8/2004 10:31:58 PM
Great capture Ed, yeah we believe you on the about ;-)
Love the title also :-)
Best wishes,
Steve
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Critique By:
ed lawson (K:896)
11/8/2004 10:10:08 PM
AJ - grained it on purpose in PS... will perhaps add the original fyi. Original just didn't seem interesting enough - and seeing as these are antique busses thought I'd 'decay' the image a bit... cheers
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Critique By:
Michele Berti (K:14921)
11/8/2004 10:03:48 PM
great use of the diagonal. superb!
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Critique By:
AJ Miller (K:49168)
11/8/2004 9:57:29 PM
There's fantastic potential in this (did you notice the closest green bus has different headlights from the rest? No I'm not an anorak either...) But I'm getting a very grainy image with some confusion at the top left. Are there any others in the series?
AJ
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Critique By:
Mica (K:892)
11/8/2004 4:21:28 AM
i like your work and concept.
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Critique By:
Mica (K:892)
11/8/2004 4:19:40 AM
it's amazing how one can turn the mundane into a work of art.
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
9/6/2004 9:54:32 PM
Great shot, with excellent exposure and color.
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Critique By:
Milton Louizidis (K:1406)
9/6/2004 9:03:43 PM
good good very good
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Critique By:
ed lawson (K:896)
8/2/2004 9:38:33 PM
yeah Paul (they're called Meringues). Am lacking inspiration right now... cheers
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
8/1/2004 10:06:34 PM
Hmmm. some sort of whipped-then-dried thing?
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